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by xoxoxo

person Galina
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jason, Jason, Jason... *shakes head* Never EVER beg for a man! Especially not for sex! Oh, this guy...

So, Scar is out of the picture or he will be back with much more anger... I hope, it's the second XD
person Naraka00
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the way the two main characters connect. One thing that I really like about this story is that it's mainly focused on love, instead of violence and murder as it's usual to see in stories based on prison life.
Alex finally gave in to his urges (I hope it was an urge...) and kissed Jason, yay! Although I feel bad for Jason, I am quite happy with the way this story is developing and I wonder how it'll affect them and the other prisoners.
Keep up the good work :)
person pupette
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
I have a thing for cold bastards and the prison setting is awesome!Can't wait to see how their relationship will evolve!

schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop in and let you know I really enjoy reading your story. Keep doing what you're doing, and don't let anyone get in your way. It has a lot of room for growth, because obviously it's your baby and you treat it right! As far as constructive criticism goes, just read it through once, twice, three times, however many times you need, to catch all the minor inconsistencies; get some one else to read it, to see it with fresh eyes.

But, honestly, you're doing fine, so keep at it! Can't wait to see the next chapter.
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If you haven't noticed by now, I am a reviewer stalker, LOL. Anyway, I forgot to mention that I am curious as to why Scott has not given Jason his protection. He seems the type of guy to be aby to protect him.
person SinfulMind
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was... a big SOMETHING! What the hell is wrong with Alex?! Why is he kissing Jason, something he is said to never do with any of his bitches, and the next moment he's kicking him out of the cell and laughing to his face? Something is really not right with him. And saying that he doesn't fuck faggots - why the hell not? Maybe he doesn't want to become attached or something? Hmm... or he's in love with someone outside the prison, a man, a it's his way of staying "faithful"? Gosh... what a weirdo :D Thank you for the update, it was a pleasure to read :)
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. Alex still confuses me, but then he's confusing Jason so I guess that makes sense. I wonder what is going on with him and why he is apparently attracted to Jason for some reason, but he won't touch him. Is it because Jason isn't tough enough for him? Is he trying to hide his feeling or trying not to get attached? I thought maybe Alex would be a bottom with another gay guy, though it seemed unlikely, but then he said he wouldn't lower himself to touch Jason, so I guess not. I'm really interested to see what happens next. I'm excited to see the dynamics between all the characters, but especially between Scott and Jason and Jason and Alex. Can't wait to read more!:)
person miles
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is Scott really a friend ? Or does he want him as his bitch ?
This chapter is scary... :)
Love it !!

Thanks for the fast update...
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, I think Alex is in denial and needs to deal with it, LOL. Oh my gosh, poor Jason almost losing his virginity to that gorilla Scar! I was so happy when Alex showed up and saved him. I wonder how he found out Jason was in trouble. I like Scott, he seems cool and Chris is nice too. Thanks for updating so fast!
person Tay
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jason, I feel so bad for him Alex has him so confused. please update soon!!!!!