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for The Prison Experience

by xoxoxo

person asdf
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know what I just realized? A great way to solve a lot of the sexual aggression problems in criminals would be to castrate them. It's inhumane but well, if someone is a murderer...why not. ok this has nothing to do with your story, it's just a thought i had while reading the latest chapter XD
person uchihasasuke
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story though sometime i'm annoyed at alex for being such an ass but I suppose that's he's character..... though I absolutely agree to you that I will never see alex as a bottom and I dont want to ever see that ever with anyone even with jason... sometimes it just turns me off when a top bottoms for the usual bottom, you know.. all in all, I like it and I hope to see scott in the next chapter to make alex jealous... hehehe.. yes i'm a sucker for love triangles... i look forward to your next update...

person eroburn
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was hot.
alex defintely seems dommy
in this.
I adore it.
I hope you don't listen to
that other review.
I think they want a rape fic.
This doesn't seem like that
kind of story.
This is your story,
so do what you want.
I personally love it,
and how it is going.

alex seems jealous,
and now he's marking his
territory. I hope for
Jason's sake that Alex
is clean.
person Galina
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If I was Jason, I sure as hell wouldn't be there the next day. Just to make Alex angry. And I would totally speak with Scott again. ... why I want so hard Jason to be punished?
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, an update! I was getting worried 'bout ya, LOL. I felt really sad for poor Scott because I like him very much. Jason better explain to him about his feelings for Alex. What happened with Alex, he did a complete turn around and I didn't expect that reaction from him since what he said to Jason in previous chapter. I kind of hope that Scott ends up with Jason and Alex or Chris. Anway, thanks for the update I really enjoyed the smut between Jason and Alex.
person dazedandconfused
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it just me again, I was online checking to see what stories have been updated today and saw a rather blunt review left by someone called, bloody_fire. Please don't let them discourage you from writing or continuing to write 'The Prison Experience. It's your story and you can write it the way you like. Personally, I love Jason and there is nothing wrong with his attitude or how he's acting (or because he hasn't been raped it's not realistic). That reviewer has not even written any stories so don't let it bother you and they don't know what they are talking about. Anyway, whatever you are doing is working and look at all the readers who love this story so don't let an occasional loser like bloody_fire hurt your feelings. I am sorry but reviewer's like that really piss me off and get my dander up, LOL. I will check back later to see if you have updated.
person eroburn
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well then.
Nothing like Knight in Shining
prison garb to save the day :)
Liking this story more and more
Maybe he secretly want's to be dominated
and begging turns him off.
Either way very awesome.
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is really good, i am hooked alreasy and i cant wait for more, please more soon i am already dying!!!
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi :)
I read your story. It's not that I'm trying to be mean, but you did say you like reviews and it happens that my opinion is not entirely positive.
Jason *is* actually being a pussy, it's not just that people are calling him that. It is what it is, this is the way you've written it, but it just annoys me.
And is he going to go through his prison time, in the universe you've created with rapes and bitches etc, without being raped once? Not realistic. Since he thrives on whining (yes, he does!), give him something real to complain about.

I hope my totally honest opinion won't discourage you from writing this story. With all its virtues and faults, fascinating and boring characters (Jason is a boring one, IMO), I want to know how it ends.
person Vic
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I still like it. I feel like the plot is moving slowly though...