rate_review Reviews

What a sweet little one-shot. Lovely, for the length. Well written, too. Fine job, thank you for putting enjoyable smut out there for us!

Beautiful little story! My compliments! And Hehe, I bet these boys will like fruits forever!

omg... i got something in my honor!
I somehow caused smutty goodness,
I am like the greatest person in the world.
Um that was food porn o.o
That dirty nectarine.
Mmm tasty.
Somehow I ended up eating orange flavored
ice-cream to this and ended up carving little
people in it.
Then I felt bad about how I was going to eat them
so I smushed them they so wouldn't exist anymore.
Then I was sad.

BTW I think Lucas is the sexiest name
in the entire world.
Along with Lucien, Luke, Luka, etc
I think this is cause when I was a teen
I watched some soap opera and it had a char
with a variant of Luke and he was so hot.
Then the dirty mean soap opera killed him.
So I don't watch them anymore.
Is it bad to get drooly over a person,
if their name is Luke no matter what they look
like or who they are?
Ty for link. Dunno how I could have missed this.
It has My name there Ref Eroburn
*Victory March*
Hugs.

The music is a perfect accompaniment.
adding it to my pandora

This was great!

Didn't see any mistakes!

Thank God Luke's mom didn't come out any sooner, lol!

Cute little one-shot alinna! :)

Pretty brave doing that on the terrace, who knew nectarines were so sexy^^ I loved the whole lazy summer feel to it and the ending definitely gave me a bit of a giggle ^_^

One teeny tiny little thing, the first paragraph starts 'We were sat on his parents terrace' not a big deal really but it kind of jumped out at me and it's an easy fix :)

Great little oneshot I really enjoyed reading it :)