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September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Kyran already - he is just my type - powerful and knows it, oh yeah! Normally I do not go for werewolf / furry stuff, but the futuristic angle got me interested. This looks like a work in progress - do you plan to continue it at some point? Would like to read more. It almost reads like a screenplay to me. I could totally see this as an anime.
If there is one thing I would change, I think it's that I can't quite get a solid grasp of what Misha is like, other than maybe tsundere... she seems to go rapidly from angry to shy to agreeable / complacent. If that's your intent, I'd paint it a bit more boldly, so it's clear that's how you want her to be.
If there is one thing I would change, I think it's that I can't quite get a solid grasp of what Misha is like, other than maybe tsundere... she seems to go rapidly from angry to shy to agreeable / complacent. If that's your intent, I'd paint it a bit more boldly, so it's clear that's how you want her to be.