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March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic read. Your first chapter had me absolutely hooked. It was so well done and very interesting that it was from the perspective of a minor character. How they saw the relationship between the two boys was beautiful and sad all at the same time. I feel for skae as the story progresses. His burning hatred is founded even if he is ruining himself. I hope tayis can mend him again. please update
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor sky...hope that isn't the end :)
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute is definitely not a word for them! It seems like they have a lot to work out. Not going to lie, I had trouble getting through this chapter and I can't pinpoint why. Anyways, I can't wait for more. I have a feeling there will be some good plot up next!
And awww skae's staring out the window at him. I like it.
Congrats on narimono... One of these days I will do that!
And awww skae's staring out the window at him. I like it.
Congrats on narimono... One of these days I will do that!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Guess who isn't dead? I know, I know. Maybe I should be writing another chapter instead of reading your story... But it's so good!
Do tell me the two get back together. They're just too.... I can't say cute because that doesn't work for this... Wow this story is dark.
Nevertheless.... The cuties, they need to be together. He kept the blanket so that means they must kiss. Now!
Do tell me the two get back together. They're just too.... I can't say cute because that doesn't work for this... Wow this story is dark.
Nevertheless.... The cuties, they need to be together. He kept the blanket so that means they must kiss. Now!
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my god... wow...
I only saw this because you posted in the forum and I am glad I did. This is amazing, shocking, and horrifying. My mouth was hanging open the whole time.
Excellent work. I loved the way you used sheep as a metaphor for the townspeople.
The only thing that drove me crazy was your use of punctuation, especially in the first few paragraphs.
I only saw this because you posted in the forum and I am glad I did. This is amazing, shocking, and horrifying. My mouth was hanging open the whole time.
Excellent work. I loved the way you used sheep as a metaphor for the townspeople.
The only thing that drove me crazy was your use of punctuation, especially in the first few paragraphs.
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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...I've read worse probably, or played worse.
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Darn, it was good. I really love your style. It's so smooth and vivid.
And thinking of poor Skae makes me so sad.
Thank you for the update!
And thinking of poor Skae makes me so sad.
Thank you for the update!
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August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
once again you prove you are an engaging writer
following this faithfully
following this faithfully
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August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a beginning! Very engrossing!
Thanks,
R
Thanks,
R
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August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really amazing story. It was so intense and absorbing. Yes, the theme was certainly dark and ferocious, but you kept the gore in thigth grip and didn't glut with it. It was very stylish and almost like a painted picture, and I just inhailed it without blinking.
Wonderful job! Thank you so much for sharing it.
Wonderful job! Thank you so much for sharing it.