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ok Ok, MUCH better! I'm sorry, but while Evan was sweet, he's a total bore. You've redeemed yourself with me. :)

This is one of my favorite stories on the whole of this website and I've read a lot. Update fast please. Can't wait to see what happens next. Merin definitely doesnt know what she likes or perhaps likes it both rough and gentle.

Trent or Even? Guys like Trent are a dime a dozen. But guys like Even are hard to find. the only thing Merin and Trent have going for them is the sex,fighting and trying make each other jealous of each,while selfishly hurting others. And that little scenario is getting tire real quick. Love Even. All Merin has to do is get him out of his comfort zone a little to let him know she liked it rough and he surprised her and was little more rough with when she didn't even see that coming from him.I even liked Trent's friend Matt at the party he seems liked a fun guy. My favorite part of your awesome story and this update is when Merin got busted sneaking out Trent's apartment by Evan. It wasn't good because she hurt Evan,But what made it so good is that Evan finally find out Merin was NO GOOD. And was using him to make try to Trent jealous and cheating on him. He doesn't deserve that. I fell in love with him when he ignored her sadly trying to call out to him and explain why she was sneaking out Trent's apartment looking a mess.When Evan shouted at her to not touch him,shrugged her hand off of him when he stalked past her punched the wall and told her to "Just Shut up".I wish I have could have seen Merin face. I fell even harder in love with Evan. Love the update can't wait for the next one.

Make him jealous girl get him back on track..

really love this story.

This story is hot as hell and well-written. Honestly, I'm torn as to who I would like her to be with in the end. Evan is the safe, stable option and he treats her well, but my libido wants her with Trent. I also wonder if he would be able to function well in a relationship. Only time will tell.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Story was going so well and I loved what I was reading up until the end where you led her straight down a path to certain divorce and unhappiness. I'm sorry, but you concentrate your story on Trent and then have her turn to the OTHER GUY? Seriously? BOOooooo!! Ughhh.. SO disappointed! :(

I pounced on this story as soon as I saw it in the feed. I was giddy at your latest update! You've got an amazing talent of sticking with the characters and not compromising, makes things fun! Excellent conflict, I'm always sucked into the story and I catch myself re-reading it whenever I have a down moment.
Keep up the awesome work! Please update soon! :]

Ahh the choice is so hard!!!
He should had known better than to leave after some sex.
I want her with a mix of both guys lol
But idk Trent's still the one i want her with

omg I just read the whole thing
I'm addicted!!!!!
I can't believe all that's going on.
I bet now they'll both try to move on and Even will finally get his "chance"
I really hope you post soon cause I wanna read more ASAP!