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person Jen
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love that you had Trent basically break into Merin's place to see her. However I can't help this sneaking suspicion that he really is in love with her too. Are you going to have him tell her about the incident with Evan? Or you could have Trent make her admit to him that she loves him...I can't wait to read part 2! Keep up the awesome writing skills, I'm like addicted to this story! :)
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oooh oooh, you made many blush with this one. It was full of Trent in action. and altough I sort of liked his earlier roughness I think I that a preference for this. He was so lovely,if I wasn't in love with him before that am surely am now! Who knew a man could combine lovelyness with utter wildness of craving a woman to one. I'm Sold to this story and this chapt. Am really looking forward to there progress. I really cant seem to find the words for this one. So keep on coming cause you just have feeded me for more. Many thanks for sharing this!
person monalisasmiles
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter! i love the character development you have going on. but i will admit, i'm sorta craving to see trent get super possessive at some sort of function or an event... maybe a future chapter idea? :D
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so, so, so amazing! please update with a new chapter soon! i'm on edge~ :D
person jen
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome awesome! Loved it! Can't wait to read the next chapter! I can't believe Trent's luck getting punched by Merin then beat up by Evan! Again, I must say, AWESOME!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whahaha... the beginning remind me a bit of Romor has it. Hehe love the chasing also the angry and a bit desperate Trent. Not to forget the fight, hehe LOVE that one. Made my heart flutter.:P Altough am really glad Evan and Merin had broken up, with the twist that she loves Trent. Love this story did not expected this and can't wait for more!
person jen
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just read all 11 chaps, in one sitting. Awesome story, but one plea. Please have her end up with Trent. Evan is too Mr. Perfect in an annoying way. Trent's such an awesome bad-ass! Either way keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehe really like this chap. Altough in the beginning it was kind of slow but the detailed after scene was really worth it. Well kinda hard after such gentle display on Trent part. Did not see the end coming with Evan, I now kind of wonder how this will ever clear up between them. Or do I really want them to make up..... Hehe. Really like this story when I began reading I never had thought it would have this kind of devolepment. Love the slow romance between Merin and Trent and the side dish with Evan. Also that all of them are still in character. You keep on suprising me with every turn so I will keep it that way. My nly toughts are will these two end up toghter cause that would be so nice and lovely. Yah!
person jen
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great new chap! Nice new drama, and loved the Trent stuff! I think Evan should just break up with her. I mean she cheated on him so obviously. Can't wait for the next chap!
person Sarantha
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Karate chops Merin in the throat* There, I feel better... Gah, I want to be mad at Trent but I can't muster the emotion... He's just too sexy! >w< I'm horrible, but so are you for cutting it off there! Kidding, kinda ;D

Keep up the awesome work.
Live~Love-JW