rate_review Reviews

I find it really hard to find well written erotica that have good written sex scenes, character building and a nice plot. But you somehow did it.
The feelings developed not over night, you took your time. What made it quite believeable. Even when I think sometimes you overdone it with the commonness of the sex... I mean it is possible when you have a strong attraction to each other and huge sex drive. Trent was a bit to aggressive with the punishment for my taste. In the whole dynamic of their relationship, I thought it a bit disruptive.
But nevertheless, this is an great story! You're very talented! I really hope you finished this story. I always find it so sad, when such a great story gets neglected..

HI!! i have been a silent reader.. but after reading this last chapter i just couldn't stay quiet any longer!! omg! i love them together.. and that stupid bitch!! i was really hoping she was gonna change and they were gonna be friends and instead she just wanted to stab her in the back.. BLAH!! and TRENT!! how could he not see that... what an idiot.. I feel sooo bad for Merin.. I can see two things happening.. I can see her running into an even more messed up Evan, who is only happy to use and abuse her while she is down, because he was sooo mad at her before.. Or better yet! i think Travis should step up, and hang out with her.. i really liked their dynamics, they acted like a brother and sister.. but trent doesn't have to know.. he could think it was more.. And with the way he didn't want to play that song, with the dumb bitch.. i think he should ignore her too! i think it would be great if he helped her out! anyways. great job! its soooo good! i have to check everyday for an update! i love this story. i hope after this is done you have another in mind. you write well! keep it up! can't wait for the next chapter hope it is soon!!

Wow, just wow. Great chapter! I loved the ending, not what happened, but the writing was just superb. I feel so bad for Merin, she was letting him in and he wound up being such a guy. I thought you were getting closer to ending the story...now I'm not as sure. How will Trent make it up to her? Will she run back to Evan? I hope not. Gah! Can't wait for the next chapter. Do you have like, email alerts? Lol.

Whaha, so much. Merin is a year older and has the luck to wake wup next to such a charming man. Love that Trent has changed but still remains dominate. Like the change in Merin also, she seems more insecure than in the beginning what probaly rubs positief off to Trent. Like the slight drama but not overbearing that the both got into to much drama or worse a fight. My heart is still in heaven en recovery of all there drama's. Like the little episode with Evan wich should not have been forgotten, or else these two would never even got toghter I think. But most of all why is Trens excited? Is he also in love..... oh oh, he grown up so fast.

Yah! love this whole chap. From sexual display to voilence to affections. altough the new girl is making me worry, hope Merin does nothing stupid with these new discovering insecurities. Like how Trent is now still the same but a lot relaxed and sweeter, not damaging the guy likeness. Like the brother also but hope he does nothing with Merin as vica versa with her insecurities. Hope she will just stick to it and maybe in the near further have a cat with with this girl. Also love the two different live styles. As that I like these two myself. Really good job and Love to see more.

As usual, great new chap. It's cool to see how they work together. I'm curious to see how Monique fits in with Trent and his past! Also can't wait to see him admit he's in love and the same for Merin! Keep up the awesome writing. I love this story, I check at least once a day to see if you've updated yet! LOL.

Again, I have to say, AWESOME! I love this story. I like where you're taking it. Though I have a feeling Trent is going to mess up somehow, probably with being exclusive. Can't wait for the next chapter! You rock!

Yah to this chapt and it is so long like part 1, love it. Love the scenes between these two and the obviously jealous and insecurities between these two. with the restaurant and shop it displayed Trent affection to her. Altough it is a bit twisted that he himself realise what I also like about the man. But the most inportant part is that Trent came up with it that he would like to try dating her. This makes me exicted to see what for suprises these two will bring. Will she confess by a angry heated disscussion or between some hot love making. Or Will Trent keep scoring these goals? Still like the demanding and submisions, keep delivering these good writen chapt.

I've been reading since maybe the fourth chapter and I'm sorry I've never reviewed before, I've always meant to but well, I have no good excuse. I've really enjoyed this story and I think you've written the characters very well. This story, in my humble opinion, is one of the better ones out there.

As Merin is a psychologist I would have liked for her to have more control over herself. But he's a pretty tough guy to resist. Since I feel that the story might be coming to a close as an avid reader I want to see her put up more resistance. Fight him a little harder and to not make it so easy for him to make his way back in.

But the story is great and wherever you decide to go with it I know I'll enjoy it. You've done a phenomenal job so far.

Yay! Another chapter. I'm totally in love with your story. I'm very curious if this new loving demeanor is going to last!