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Awesome :) Kept me hooked until the last :)

I love the end I just wish it didn't have to. I must admit, I didn't think this was gonna be the last chapter. I want more tales for them. But you did great with them and I loved this story! Keep on writing!

Great story. Loved it immensely! I am glad that Merin beat the piss out of Monique and that she gave Trent another chance. He is just simply too delicious not to. ;) I will be reading your new story, as well. You are a wonderful writer and should definitely get that published.

So I love this story.. and i am soooooo sad to see you end it.. I also felt that the end was kinda rushed.. I felt like you could write more. Like we still never really got to find out more about his life, and what happens after they get back together.. i don't know that is just me maybe.. Maybe you will do a sequel?? I just felt like there could have been more!! lol. but other than that, it was AMAZING!! so sad to see it done.. but if you change your mind and want to add chapters, i am totally cool with that!! lol. great job!

I really like it. Good chapter. Even when I hope that she wouldn't let him "back in" just now.
I hope this situation gives them a chance to clear somethings up... I thinks it's not only about the kiss but their whole relationship needs more clarity, so they have both more certainly in it... and this might gives them a chance to have more than sex... actually do something together, or at least talk more than 2 minutes. ;)
can't wait for more

Whaa, what is going on. I dont really understand why the hate is always directly put towards the guy. She could show and SHOULD dislike that little selfish person that keeps on humping on Trents leg. Tough a good chap, I really like to see what she is going to do exept run away and concure her fears she's the shrank here. Love to see that and some upblossem love between the two.

I am really enjoying this story! I read all 19 chapters in one night and can't wait for more! Am I odd to say I liked Evan? Even though Trent is yummy and dominant, something about Ev... Maybe cause Trent just thinks Mer will obey him with no questions asked? But I wouldn't mind a night in the sack with him myself! And what about the guy at he cabin? So many things! I feel something juicy will happen soon! Keep up the awesome work!

God, this story just gets better and better!! I'm very glad you decided to expand and complicate their relationship like this. Wonderful writing :)

I don't know what to say about this chap. It was great as usual! Trent manned up but will Merin accept it, or will she pull away more. I hope she goes back to him. Trent seems really sorry. He's now admitted his love twice and she only really said it when she's drunk. Or maybe she can have fun with Travis? Lol. We'll just have to see! Hoping for a quick next chapter!

Noooooo what is this! Am really began to dislike some female orgin in this story.... I think Merin should knock her up badly cause that would be a satifaction I grave to right now. As for Trent I did not dislike how he reacted cause that is normal I think for someone you care(d) for. Got mixes feeling about Travis right now but I really hope Trent will be able to crack her four meter high walls again. By some possesieve sweetly rescue scene. Cause it would only make sense Merin will know run away from him, but I have my doubts that she will be back at work full force or will wunder around and get in trouble with somebad crowd. If the latest that could be a chance for the dark knight. Can't wait, a waiting fan ME is waiting ecxited for the next chapter.