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June 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
You have such a wonderful imagination, and you capture it so vividly with your words. I was there. I could hear the sea and smell the salt on the breeze, see the sunset. A perfect end to a day, it really is.
I loved it all, but the sound of her moans echoing in the spiral staircase - there's something very evocative about that.
Great work :)
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an idyllic tryst. It was so beautifully told that I could picture it perfectly in my mind, from the meal down to the delightful variation on dessert. Simply marvelous, as always!
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending to a night at the seashore! Well done. :D