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for Blood and Metal

by xXKuroTenshi666Xx

person SunaoTsuji
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-6. Wooo~! And the plot thickens!!!! Love your long chapters. I can't wait to meet Rory. I wonder if Neo is the one that helped Rory get Alabaster(Angel) out of Apex. Of course, I'd like to know the relationship between Neo and Rory. Especially if the two ever settled down with each other trying to raise Alabaster. Though I see it more of *spoiler*spoiler* and I'm only guessing here. You've left me in suspense and I can't wait to read more!
person lo
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great, that last chapter really got things moving and I like the mix of fantasy and sci-fi.
person Raafling
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn’t sure if I liked this at first, as it is somehow different from my usual fare, but I’m glad I gave it a chance! I really like the backstory you’re building up here. Not sure if you’re still working on this, but even if you aren’t I’ve really enjoyed what you’ve got so far.
person smint45
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing^^ We get to know alot about Alabasters past!!! I want more^^ Hope to hear from you again soon!!
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He lifted his gaze from the poster and toward the bar as he put it away. He didn’t understand how a criminal was supposed to be able to help him, but he had fate [faith] in his Master

"Yes. I do not know the thieves scent, but I might be able to pick up on the books though it will be difficult from the resent [recent] rain." He said as he brushed dust off the top of the trunk.

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It's late and I have to go to bed. I`ll read the last two chapters tomorrow. So far I like it and will be following it. Thanks for sharing this story!!
person oOMissGOo
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wah... you need to write more... I luv the way it goes^^
person smint45
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was amazing!!!! So now it really starts to get interesting^^Who wants the book and for what? I really want to see Kaden fight again^^I really love the fighting scenes!!!! They are so amazing!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you again!!!!
person Smint45
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I like when kaden loses control^^like with the overwhelming noises and such!!! And the small smutty interlude in the end was great!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
person lividfire
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LoL, them together is FUN.
person lividfire
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
p.sI still think the red one is YUM;O