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by mannahpierce

person sadie237
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh SQ where do I start?! WoW! I was yielding YES YES YES Jason is 'poking' someone:) Reading 'poking' just makes me smile. It was so unfair for him to be poke-less when Kell isn't. I'm so happy he has Jack! I know Kleen has done such wonderful things and Jason has artist moods. But Queenie I just can't help NOT liking Kell doing this to Jason. Yes Jason is happy if Kell is happy and maybe I can't understand guy love:) I just get turn on my it.(sorry did I write that out loud) I like the new Queen of the Rosie. Jack is definitely a hottie now. The poet-it is interesting. I think the Captain has grown on me. It just hit me up side the head! The title is perfect:) I'm in slow-mo today:) Once again Space Queen another magnificence chapter! Thank you for ALL your hard work ^_^ PS I didn't mention To-chan and Papa! I couldn't resist ^_^
person eroburn
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm.
yap that's all i've got.

person Procrastination_is_key
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... jealousy. And from both Jason and Kell! It was interesting to see Kell jealous of someone else because personality ranks higher than looks in Jasons mind, though Kell's reaction to Jason rejection of being queen was (and is) quite fascinating. I hope that thread continues to the next chapter because I would like to see Kell look after Jason again.

I love 'Jason'- every chapter is its own story tied together through characters and their web of relationships and previous interactions.
person Fluister
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahw, I loved this chapter. So much happened! And I have to say that I find the developments between Kell and Jason fascinating. Especially when Jason told Kell the truth without trying to soften the blow, because he's always giving up a part of himself for Kell's sake.

Ah, and I loved the image of Ferret and Jason on the couch. It was just very sweet and yeah.. I just love Ferret

(And... Ekellen? Is that the same Ekellen that was in your Naruto story? hahaha)

Anyway, I really loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, Mannah. Love problems and then I've been busy, too. I'm still loving this story, though. I look forward to Thursday so I can read the newest chapter. I think Jason would have made a good queen, but if he doesn't want the job, he doesn't want it. Jack reminds me of Nagato from "Naruto: Shippuden"--mainly in the skinny redhead way. *laughs*

Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
person v
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah Ha!! A study in Spacer life....much better, now I get it! Now I can say this chapter I really enjoyed, cause I stopped reading with expectations of what might happen or who it would happen too..and blah! blah! blah! Sometimes the fan imagination can get a little outta control...sorry. So now I'm reading "Jason", and I like it, I like it very much, on its own. So...what the heck with the baby Kell, some people can be a little whacko (ahem..klenn). Its like a sneak peek, with a little WTF!!! you keep writing...I'll keep reading... lol :)
person SidonieStarr
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nothing much to say - just that I still like this story. You have an interesting fascination with textiles.
person eroburn
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A spacers life is no life for Eros.
Weep for them.
person sadie237
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the adventure in the lifes of spacers! Most of all I love being in Jason life. Poor thing. He had so much on his plate. Kell, the ship,Jack, the tapestry. Thank goodness he can go to Ferret. When he need comforting. I'm glad the captain worked out for the Rosie's crew:) He seem stiff at first but I think he turning out to be a nice guy. I look forward to what Ferret will suggest for the crew to do about their Queen problem. I guess Kell does love Jason in his own issued way:) For me it has been an amazing 'Artist' adventure ^_^
person kc
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted youto know that I LOVE this story. I have read some of your Naruto fics in this world-view, but I have to admit I am enjoying this story more. I think part of what I really like is how fresh the characters are. I find it difficult to separate "cannon personalities" from Naruto characters when they are in an AU setting. I love the whole world-view you have created with the spacers. I hope that you continue to post more chapters, as I am selfish that way.