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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good job!
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March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When another person starts talking, that requires a new line.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait until the next chapter! I like how Bruce has a baby face and bubbly personality but is the complete opposite in the sack. ;)
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Also, an editor wouldn't be a bad idea.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this so far ! Hope to see another chapter.