rate_review Reviews

u have to write more! These are amazing!

Well, it was slightly short. It was also rather confusing. For the first few parts I couldn't tell who was thinking or speaking or doing actions. Plus the moment of the art notebook and the furries having sex just threw me off, since it only appeared once more and had little to do with the story. A useful idea to help Jess (She's the actual child of the mother and father, while Alex is the adopted artistic one, right?) be rational about wanting to have sex with her adopted sister. Cute, short scenes, but it could be improved.

4 out of 10