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for The Best Man

by mvsanche

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that Sera got the happy ending she deserved,but I'm so sad to this story to end, it was one of the only reasons I came to this site looking for your story update. Thank you so much for such a lovely story can't wait for your future stories. And good luck on your book.
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! I'm excited and so very happy your back to finish this wonderful story. And love how Sera's healing,development and progress are going and I can't to read what if anything happens with her and Dev. What Dev's been doing sense Sera left.
person Rain
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting for an update to this story T_T....
person inthemood
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear about your "Health Issues" I'll being praying for,hope you have a speedy recovery.Love the latest chapter. I'm so glad Devdan finally came and gave Rick what he deserved. It's to bad it came at the cost of Rick almost beating Sera to death. But it was well worth the wait. Hopefully Sera will get a divorce from that know good monster. And she & Devdan can finally be together, well maybe after heals & she gets out of the hospital, and get's some counseling for the mental & physical abuse she suffered from being with Rick. Keep up the get work with this wonderful. Can't for the next chapter. And take care of yourself.
person Shyann
schedule August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter....
I totally understand about those health issues 100% agree with you on that going through it to.
Keep up the updates when you can..
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, barely found it now, but I already want more!
Dev sounds so sexy :P I hope Sera finds her way out of Rick's house immediately,
he's such an asshole!

More soon please!
person inthemood
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really heartbreaking yet so good story. It's real and sadly relatable. I was so & hurt when Sera stayed that pompous ass jerk Rick. And what's up with her sister being a whore and cheating and not just with anyone but, her own sister's husband. Sera parent's are even worst it's almost like they encourage Sera's so called sister Brenda that it's alright for her to cheat with Sera's husband.Sadly Rick got Sera to do exactly what he wanted her to do & that was to make sure she know but him to rely on.She has know friends & know family just him. he still having his cake and eating it too. Sadly he showed just how horrible he really when started beating Sera.I love Devdan. Sera & him are so good together. I love this story so much & can't wait for your next awesome update. Anxiously
person Shyann
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was a waste staying with him...
Can't wait for more...

p.s If you need any I deals I can help..
person Shyann
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok she's going to be very disappointed in the near future.
please post more asap.
person Shyann
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please post more...
You left with a fantastic story then stop posting.
Thats just mean...