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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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I have the feeling they are both playing with fire right about now. His goal seems ambitious, as does her goal of using that thermometer. Still, my heart just aches for him...
And you score a two-fer for this prompt as well! Superb, my dear!
I have the feeling they are both playing with fire right about now. His goal seems ambitious, as does her goal of using that thermometer. Still, my heart just aches for him...
And you score a two-fer for this prompt as well! Superb, my dear!
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a delicate process of negotiation they've begun. She understands his need to fight her, but he's not quite ready to give her that satisfaction. I'm utterly enthralled, and I can't wait to see where this leads.
You're so adept at conveying the subtle nuances of dominance and submission, and your characters have a depth that makes them linger long after I've closed the page.
You're so adept at conveying the subtle nuances of dominance and submission, and your characters have a depth that makes them linger long after I've closed the page.
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like! Looking forward to more!
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July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Loved how you snuck the word in!
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July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And? AND?
You are the master of the well-wrought cliffhanger, as well as extraordinarily good at creating characters that grab hold of the reader and insist on being noticed. I'm so hoping you're planning to continue this, because it's marvelous!
You are the master of the well-wrought cliffhanger, as well as extraordinarily good at creating characters that grab hold of the reader and insist on being noticed. I'm so hoping you're planning to continue this, because it's marvelous!