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Alright, admittedly I'm not one for Shouta. I really don't like it because I have a thing about underage children but I had skimmed through the erotica section (alot) and came upon a few noah stories. So I decided today that I would go through all your stories to the beginning and read it all from the start along with the kama sutra monks (which actually I'm learning about the kama sutra and what it means in religion in school) anyways. I did that.

I read all through and I am kind of happy with how it turned out with Noah. That he's the Empty One, I figured. I am happy that he is in a place where he can be helped by Tienpo. I like the idea that he's willing to stay with Noah and fix him if at all possible. I would actually like you to continue this if at all possible. I do have a problem reading the shouta stuff but I could read this, especially after knowing what happened to him and seeing what could happen next and I kind of wonder if he has nightmares about it. I got why he was shaking because he had been full of something for almost every day of his life atleast I'm assuming, so maybe that's why. And I want to know how Tienpo will plan to take care of Noah.

So yea, just thought I would review.

Hi!
I hope everything is well with you. Its been a long time since you've updated. :)

I had some mixed emotions about this one. In a way, it was depressing to see just how much Noah was damaged by his childhood; the thing that makes underage erotica morally acceptable (and very hot) is that it's a victim-less crime, so this story was a strong bit of realism. Still, it fit well with the Noah arc, and it managed to be rather hot while still maintaining a wonderful plot. Also, I wanted to know; this is what Mr. Banks was "training" Noah for all along, right? There was a brief mention of it in "Noah at Rosewood Stables", I think...but one of the other reviews was musing about Mr. Banks just dropping his son off randomly, so it made me think I might be wrong. xD

Really, for as popular as you are, I'm surprised at the small amount of reviews you get. But you're an incredible writer, so I wanted to give you props. I cant wait to see more from you (and if you ever need a beta, I'm available :P).

That was beautiful. It was something that actuallypulled at my heartstrings.

I am more interested in knowing what happened between Noah and his father when they went their separate ways.

Did Noah's dad just dump him in the middle of nowhere after he got too old? Maybe Noah's dad found (or produced?) a new child to molest and slowly ignored Noah's existence until there was no room for Noah anymore? Honestly there's a dozen scenarios in my mind about how we went from Noah and Dad to Noah and Monk.

I WANNA KNOW GOD DAMMIT~!

I really hope you continue this. Poor Noah has been put through so much It'd be wonderful to see him get the happy ending and peace he deserves. <3

Aww! This. I've always been a fan of the Noah stories. Something about the dynamic between Noah and his dad is so hot. When I saw you were making Noah older, I'll admit I had reservations. However, this is a twist on both Noah and the monks that I never saw coming. I love the idea that there is actually more to Noah's training, that he does become the empty one the monks so fear. This makes me want to know all of the back story now! Extremely well done, and so cute!