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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person iriskzk1
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another update. I'm ready to hear what is going on with the institute because I was wondering about all the other trials. Love the story, keep it up!!
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh! I love love loved this chapter. Please update soon. And after that do it soon again. :P
person animekid
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fuck this story is awesome.

Read this on a whim; I was like "200 reviews almost for 6 parts? What the heck." And it's good.

I like how you give the point of views with C as well as Benny there. I also enjoy the timeline. The whole plot is posh as well as your writing style.

But ummm how is those two going to deal with Benny's seasickness? I can image that being an issue in the future.

Still you have another fan here.
person animekid
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to f5 this story. I laughed at the interaction between those two and how our poor young man seemed to deal with having a human shark hybrid in his house.

That wants to mate with him.

I can't wait to see what happens next. GLAD so glad I picked this up.

Hahahah captcha says waterloo.
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, can't wait to read more! :)
person addiena saffir
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Crying* oh thank the good lord your back! So glad to see this chapter; you have no idea. Loved loved loved it, btw. Cannot wait to see how the pants convo goes and if they venture out to find new 'territory'. Evander will take some getting use to, but i like it. I will be waiting with baited breath for the next installment.
person Bambi
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wah!! Such an amazing story. I read your Pack Dynamics before, but I didn't notice you were the same author until a couple minutes ago. I love your writing, and I love this story! I didn't even mind the slow build up, bc it was so enjoyable to read. Can't wait for you next chapter =)
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
184 reviews for six chapters!? Ay caramba! How do you do this!?!?!? Tell me your secrets!

Other than that I loved this chapter ^_^ I can't wait to see where this goes from here!
person Sarkukka
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeeh! A new wonderful chapter! Thank you so much.
I loved it. The line about the smell of Bentley's blood was great! But to think Evander usued to be a human is really sad. Definitely the right one or he would have been some weird test-tube project all along. And they finally kissed! The best of best ever!!
person Nine
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"primed for mating" I loved that line! I love Evander and his sharky nature. I love that we are getting some answers. So Evander was human once. Exciting!
And Bentley's wake up was every bit as wonderful as i knew it would be. Thank you! everything is still so lovely in this story. every chapter is of the same outstanding quality as the one that preceded it. I love how forthright Evander is. I also love his real name. And Bentley is as cute as ever. I am still stressing out that the security guard from the Lufdor institute is going to hunt Evander down and trace him to Ben's apartment. where will Evander go? what will he do? i really am looking forward to finding out! yay! thank you so much for sharing!