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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person Ellie
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
finally some action =D. though...I would be terrified if i was getting a blow job from someone with a full set of pointy teeth...lol at least Bently doesnt mind~ =D
person Nine
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you have made my day. thank you for writing this story. i appreciate the effort it must take to consistently produce something of this quality. what can i say? i love evander i love bentley. this chapter was so smexy! sharkman is as hilariously blunt about everything as usual... and i can not wait for the next chapter to learn more about the lufdor institute... i hope some of the other experiments survived...
person Emily
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredibly well written and interesting. The way you describe things is just wonderful! I didn't think this story would be up my ally, but I've been reading it since chapter two and can't get enough! You're absolutely lovely, keep up the good work! It's much appreciated!
person Nock
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. It changes from the ordinary and is well paced and well written. I look forward to hear Evander's story and the ones of the other trials.
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am so hooked on this story and I can't wait for more. This premise is very good and it is so well written, I think that it is on par with some of the great sci authors out there. I am so excited to read more.
person Bambi
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
haha bentley's getting used to evander's attitude already, ignoring him and going to sleep, how cute =) Thanks for the update, I had a bad day, and this cheered me up some!
person lunamist
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another update. I'm wondering what's going to happen with the research facility. Does the public now know what was going on there? Will "C" take Bentley to some private island in the pacific where they'll live without having to tie an extension cord around poor Bentley every time Evander goes out to hunt? So many questions. Can't wait to read what really happens!

lunamist
person oo
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
can evan retract his teeth? cause, well.... lol.
does he just have one row of teeth?
person reader1962
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story!
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hehehe. He likes Evander kisses ;) I wonder how everything is going to continue to work and what sort of things have been found out about the institute. great job!