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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person Tbd
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good thing u r updating fairly frequently cuz this story is addictive! Looking forward to the next chapter!
person dut
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Some nice juicy bits in this chapt Cant imagine how cautious you need to be when kissing a guy with sharp teeth... sexy bathroom scene. I like.. Now that the news is out. I bet they will find out that Evander is missing.... Its getting exciting.. Thanks for the update.
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lots of shark-man loving for Bentley, who is trying to make believe he is immune to Evander’s charms, and is actually powerless when trying to fight against his own attraction. And it is hilarious when he mentally chastises himself, whenever he (inevitably) falls for Evander’s allure.

Roll on the next chapter!
person Viky
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you describe C in this chapter. I dont want him to turn all human. The animal-human behavior is so sharming!
person smint45
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so fantastic!!! Although I really wonder how evander did the blowjob with his sharkteeth without hurting Bently^^See you again!!!
person animekid
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is......IS there going to be some revolt with Benny and the trials against humans? I can so see that happening and the trails remember him.

......why am I calling him Benny.....and Evander Evan and....ugh.

My brain isn't working.

But I still enjoy this story; it's always a pleasure reading it. Serious and funny at the same time and the right moments of hot. At least Benny's dick wasn't bit off-

-cuts herself off-

Is it bad that I kind of want to see C bite him? Like a shark hickie? Or on the ass?

Eh whatever don't mind my aimless ranting; still please keep up the good work?
person lo
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great work, I love how they are feeling each other out, it's so much fun to see them interact.
person Chibikodo
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha Bentley had no idea the experiments were once human... Lol It's interrsting that he knows random things yet can be so clueless at times. :) looking forward to the next chapter to see what he says next to Evander.
person miles
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update ! :)
And the hot chapter ! ^^
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have a new fan here! I saw your story a couple of days ago but I was hesitant to start reading it cus I wanted to try and wait till more chapters accumulated. Obviously I didn't last long >.< But I was still in luck cus while I was reading so updated so I still had one more chapter than planned :) All in all it's a really interesting story. The shark thing is very original. We've had lots of shape shifters and stuff but never really anything fish-like. I'm just kind of afraid for Ben. I hope that when their "mating" finally occurs, C won't chomp his head of while biting on his neck in ecstasy O.o