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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, either it's a coincidence but recently there was a 7.7 magnitude earthquake off the coast of BC. I just thought it was worth mentioning, especially since that chapter was released months before it happened.
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon! I need to know what happens next!

Also any tips as to how you have over 200 reviews for only a few chapters? :0 It seems like an unreachable number for me!
person missy
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Best story on the site. Please update.
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, it's surprisingly amusing to read something that takes place in my very own province and country. I love your story thus far, and I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story and looking forward to future updates!
person AimeethaNinjaa
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, pleeeaaaaseeee update soon!! >_< the wait is killing me! that cliffhanger was just too cruel...
person nyarale
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and find the universe and characters really intriguing. I'm liking it so far. I'm just a bit uneasy with issues that I hope will be addressed in future chapters, like how Bentley seems to accept being tied as something vaguely annoying but not more than that. Does he ever think about how Evander would react if he were to really fight him ? Will their relationship be an abusive one born in stockholm syndrome ? I really hope it will be addressed because that would make this story all the more fascinating !
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH NO POOR EVANDER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting so intense! It is fantastic :D! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
person Morganea
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! New reader here and damn your story is great! Your characters, the plot the way you write, everything is enticing. Bentley and Evander are just perfect together. Did i tell you that I love the name Evander (and his character ofc <3)? Its perfect.

The latest ha dme screaming a tmy screen because of Bentley naive thought process. And Evaner thought he was betrayed too ;_; I hope Bentley finds a way to get make him understand that he was trying to protect him. Also I don't know how i feel about Jude so far. What's for sure is that i dont hate him.

With Evander returning to the lab (nooooooo!) Im worried about Bentley. Especially because of the female trial snake. If she's still alive, she might attempt to do something with Bentley. Ah well in any case, this story is my fave, its bookmarked and i can't wai tfor the next chapters. IM HEA DOVER HEELS WITH THIS STORY!