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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person js
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool story.
person vol123
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hot damned things is gettin hot
person addiena saffir
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah t minus ? till first contact? ah man cannot wait to see the next one so pumped. I wish they could communicate a little more. but this is good so far. I'm a little worried at the single minded way C is thinking of 'breeding' Bentley, i mean is he going to be upset when he realizes that they can practice till kingdom come but no baby sharks will come of it?
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LK THIS STORY AND HOW YOU UPDATE SO OFTEN PLEASE KEEP IT UP. PLUS LOVES THE LION DUDE TO .
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove this! ^_^ More! I demand more!

Also I'm jelly! This has only been up a few days but it already has loads more views than my story; but I can see why, this is well written and not to mention it's a very original pairing in my opinion ^_^ So update again soon!
person Honey
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!
person Slaveneko
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love how c wont allowd anyone neear him hahs i have a quetion would he fit withing the bards if c haf pulled him it keep me wondering
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo can't wait for more me likey
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked and hope you continue writing this new story! I can't wait to find out what happens that causes Bentley to rescue Trial 139C and thought it was cool how we could read it's thoughts in regard to Bentley being it's prey, LOL. I am also curious to find out if he was created somehow, was actually a shark turned into like a half man or something, or a man turned into a shark by experimentation. Oh, and please don't forget about "Ruin". It's been a long time since you posted new chapter and I really liked that one too but again I love all your stories. Welcome back and I've missed your stories.
person MountainLake
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The beginning sounds very promising. I'll be waiting for the next chapter :)