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This second chapter is awesome ! Thanks for the fast update ! ^^
I really don't know how he's going to save C... With all the security and pervert scientist...
And I like the form of your story, with the different months...

Oooh, I am very happy you updated so fast! Thank you!!!

Well, now C, as Bentley likes to call him thinks of him as 'human' instead of 'prey'. I am relieved now because I was getting worried C was going to try and eat him, LOL. He seems really possessive and I like that. Interesting, how he memorized Bentley's address makes me wonder whether or not he somehow escapes and manages to find him at his apartment. I am not sure if I like Jude yet or not and wonder if he will try and 'rape' Bentley or something. I despise Dr. William's (and anyone who would starve any kind of living creature just for an experiment). He deserves to die a painful death like being eaten alive by C but hopefully not before he does something bad to Bentley.

My imagination is running away with me so I better close off until next chapter, LOL.

Whoops, I just read over my review and it didn't come out the way I meant it too. (He deserves to die a painful death like being eaten alive by C but hopefully not before he does something bad to Bentley.) I don't want him to do anything bad to Bentley like turning him into fish bait or something worse.

*giggle* yayers a new chappie! Loving the insight into C and the slow build-up in the plot. Cannot wait to see what happens next. Are you going to go into the process they used to make C? It seems he was human before they messed with him. I would love to the doc get eaten though he was a sadistic fucktard.

In one word - addicting! I found myself totally sucked in, and now I want more! Damn it.
Anyway, A really interesting concept and awesome writing. Can't wait to see where you're taking this.
And also - I just loveee C, sharp teeth and all :)

yay! speedy update!
This just gets more interesting. So was shark man a normal human once? Bentley sounds pretty cute and i love that he is so sweet. I love the moments when we get to ee from shark man's pov.
I read all your stories last night. Your writing is amazing.
i hope you haven't abandoned Ruin. i mean it has pirates, princes, regency era awesomeness and future technology coolness and so much romance...
thanks for sharing your stories
sending you love-hearts and millions of roses

please keep writing you have an awesome gift and story :)

I love this story!!! It's written so well and the characters are very interesting I just want to read more and more about them! Please update again soon!

This story is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how we can see both perspectives and the characters are very intriguing. Please update soon!

awh. go bentley go. don't let anyone mess with your C. Poor guy was starving. great job! :D can't wait for more!