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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person Ramen Ferret
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I. LOVE. Your. Story!!!!!!! Best fic I've read all year! I wish there were more chapters. I love that you throw in a little pov change it really makes the characters pop. UPDATE SOON!
person Mint
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this story of yours so much like all ur other ones!!!! I hope you could PLEASE finish this and ur other unfinished ones....PLEASE??

Please update asap!!!
person my_perviersites
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You HAVE to update this as soon as possible!! It's just so freaken HOT!!! I can't wait til it gets even better!! Oh I'm so waiting for things to get hot and heavy and how you're going to get our beloved shark-man out of his prison!! You definately need to have his hot boy toy give him a better name too. Something hot. Can`t wait to see what you do with this!
person Julia
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning!
I like how there is no hero bent on saving everyone.
The whole story is interesting and I hope for more.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It sounds amazing already and I'm eager to see where you take it.
person Nine
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it already. definitely! I am really looking forward to the next chapters. Seems like an interesting plot (and I love the possessiveness of the seme - at least that is what i assume he is lol)
person smint45
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting start!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
person miles
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back ! :)
And you wrote a very interesting first chapter !
I can't wait for more...
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to read more its a great start update soon ^_^
person smint45
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh that was really nice!!! I like this story a lot^^ See you again soon!!!