rate_review Reviews

Just found your story, so far it is very interesting & keeps your attention all the way to the end of the chapter. I really like your descriptions of the Trials, and it was neat to hear about another one besides C. I wonder if you'll include others as well or give us another look at B? Will we get to 'hear' the other Trials thoughts as well? I also wonder if C has anyway to communicate with Bentelly other than just actions? You are doing a great job with this story, can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for sharing this story here at AFF. It's a great read so far.

I have no idea what i feel about this, but I can't stop reading...

Maaannnn, I can't wait for more XD

Awesome concept and execution. I was nearly devastated when the "next chapter" link disappeared. I love Ben and I'm fascinated by the glimpses of the shark's POV. I can't wait to read more!

Your story got even more interesting!
I loved the part where C and Bentley almost touched on the roof!
Their interaction is great and the second project, the lion, was a great surprise.

I can't wait for more!
Thanks for writing.

I tried to review yesterday but for some reason it wouln't post :( Hopefully I'll have better luck today! Love your story, seriously jealous here lol but the setting is fantastic and the cross between human and animal thoughts in C is delightful! This is one of those stories that I have always wanted to read but no one had written until now, thank you so much! And please continue! :)

Cool story so far! I look forward to more of your updates

dude, im liking this.

Great story, the summary made me curious enough to take a peak and I must say what I read was very interesting.
The relationship between Bentley and C grows every day and very naturally, even thought they're completely different beings. And of course the shark DNA gives C that rough edge most half human and half animal characters possess which I think is a must for these stories. I liked how the first smut happened with C still in the tank and Bentley doing his usual work routine (I'm assuming 139C will probably escape in the nearby future or Bentley will somehow get into the water tank for the mating to happen... oh boy, can't wait for that one xD )
I'm also really curious to see how bad (or maybe good, yeah definitely good) the bite will be when C bites Bentley.
This story is very good, it flows naturally as if the characters are actually alive and some secret genetic research company actually exists in the XXI century.

I will quietly (and excitedly) wait for more chapters to come. Keep up the good work!

OOHH! this is VERY interesting!! The month by month style is pretty cool too!! The fusion of animal dna with human definitely makes for fun stuff!!! (That lion was fun too!!) Can't wait until he gets out of there and they can interact without the glass ;)

Very good story and I can't wait for more!!!! Thanks!!

~hitachiintwinlover