rate_review Reviews

I'm enjoying thing more and more every chapter.

Bentley is such a sweet guy...
I really love this story so far and I can't wait for more...
:))

Well, it si unusual...reading about Bentley getting off to a half-animal is weird.
but some moments like the shark memorizing the adress were funny, bentley going to the top of the tank was touching...I laughed with the feline actually when the feline scared him ahahaha.
Uhm in your story synopsis that I just read ..well you still didn't get to the chapters in which THAT happens.
I hope when he gets out you'll explain how he came t be, how many are there and where are you heading with this story snce it's obvious that shark boy i sno head of meta human reistance since he seems to be oblivious to his kind and they of him.

Awesome story - really. I'm loving the Bentley as the main character and his relationship with B, please update soon!

This is great.

I haven't read a story like this before and it is really good. I especially like 139C's reaction and thoughts.
It was also nice to read about another trial.

Please update soon I can't wait for 139C to get Bentley.

This chapter. I like it. Another?

I really like this story. I like the characters you created and how the story is developing. When I saw you had written a new story I immediately went to check it. I really love Pack Dynamics and I wasn't disappointed by the start of this one, hoping it will get even better ;)
Keep up the good work. :)

Oh my gosh, have I told you how much I love this new story of yours yet? Hmmm, I wonder what would have happened if Jude didn't interupt Bentley on the rooftop when C almost grabbed him. I think it hilarious how from the first chapter C was thinking of him as food but now as his mate, LOL. I love it. I like B too he sounds interesting and I wonder if he knows C? I still am curious to find out if these 'experiments' are actually real men who where turned into creatures by that mad doctor! I hope you keep updating every day it makes me happy BUT please don't forget 'Ruin' but only after you finish Trial 139C, ok?

Oooh, I just thought of something!!! What if Jude and B kind of connect like Bentley and C eventually will?! That would be kind of cool but I shall have to wait and see what you have planned.

This is a very interesting story.. I especially liked C's thoughts,it was quite funny for mew actually.