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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I love the tension, I love the confusion, I am on the edge of my seat hoping that C doesn't bite Bentley in half because I'm pretty sure he'd like to have him around longer than one night. Gaaaaaah I love this story (and as a scientist who works with animals, this story makes me appreciate the fact that nothing I work with is a hybrid and that we all stick to gorram protocol).

The real question, though, is: will Bentley ever get his hoodie back from the poor fox hybrid? :)

Thank you for a wonderful story. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. (Also I love the rest of your work--Pack Dynamics was brilliant--and if you ever decide to update Run, I will be the happiest fanperson on the planet.) <3
person Melsa
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, want more. Too bad he wasn't able to grab him through the bars...
person Nemo
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! could this story get anymore addictive?? I love C!! I was soo angry when Jude showed up out of nowhere! Damn it! XD can't wait for the next chapter!
person chikage
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story...its a great one, nice characters, good start, very interesting setting. I also like the style of your writing:)
...I'm kinda addicted now..so please update soon, I can't wait to read more^.^
chi
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is very interesting! Keep up the great work!
person Sarkukka
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I'm head over heels to Bentley and C. Sure it's little scary to think all those teeth. But those two breeding...gonna faint!
Thank you so much for this amazing fic. I hope you've time to update as soon as possible. I'm eagerly waiting no matter what. <3
person Avig
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. :) very good read and I can't wait to see what will happen.
Keep it up!!
person Nine
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that there was another update today!! I feel so lucky!
Such a lovely chapter!!
C is so funny... and so is Bentley
As for B, I would laugh if he falls in love with Ben as well... If all the trials fall in love with him...
I feel so bad for these experiments, caged up like that. I can not wait to find out what happens, how they break out etc...
As for the security guard... what is up with him? is he going to be a threat? I get worried whenever he comes along...
I am also worrying for Bentley's future!! C's idea of breeding sounds a little terrifying...
thank you so very much once more!

As for your writing, I don't think i have praised it enough yet.
I love how you are spacing out the story over the months. very interesting way to do it. A lot like that christmas story you wrote. I think it is very effective.
i love your stories!!
person Ellie
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more....please =D
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am such a huge fan of yours. Is there a story you write that isn't bloody fantastic??? The answer to that is no! :) can't wait to see what happens next!