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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person JStorm
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
how dare you leave me with a cliffhanger! great chapter.
C is a very possessive shark. It seems that Bentley is the only one that shows some king of humility with trials
person eilidhdawn
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like it looking forward to more very soon hopefully
person Princess_Aiyana
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am finding this story so very entertaining and enjoyable to read! I am really intersted in the dynamics of how these scientists created the hybreds and were these test subjects unsuspecting humans who needed money so volunteered or were they kidnapped off the streets? I am seriously needing to find out about this disaster you mentioned is going to happen so will be stalking you to find out.
person addiena saffir
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Squeal-of-ear-splitting-magnitude* reader parks herself in front of the clock waiting for the next day to arrive. *come on! come on! speed up you stupid clock!*
person Dance
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I am SOOOO in love with this story. I've been stalking it since you put it up yesterday. I can't wait for C and Bentley to meet without the tank between them for the first time!!
person VOL123
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg plz give us the next chapter plz plz plz
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo another chapter, damn you write fast! Wish I could too. Thanx.
person iriskzk1
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I kept scrolling by this story and finally decided to give it a try and ........ I'm soooooooo glad I did. I love this story. It just grabs you and pulls you in and there is nothing you can do about it and to me that is the difference between a good writer and a great one.
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More right now would be Awesome! <3~<3~
person oo
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
neat creatures.