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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person dazedandconfused
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ack, I am so pathetic! I've been stalking 'Trial 139C' all day in the hopes you would update but you fooled me!!!! I am going to the fireworks with my friends and then we are going out to celebrate so I won't be able to find out what the big disaster is until another day ~~~ cries ~~~~ I am so upset. Please don't let me down and at least update by tomorrow. I guess you spoiled me.
person Layton
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm, are you planning on posting chapter 5 soon? **** nudge **** push **** slaps you with a fish no make that a shark crossbreed by the name of C **** tickle **** pinch **** cough **** begs **** screams **** hangs head in shame for begging and slithers off to parts unknown ****
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAH I LOVE THIS!!! Love. Please continue... seriously. I'm really enjoying it. I kinda want Bentley to bust C out of the tank, Free Willy style, haha.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really having fun reading this new story of yours and hope you continue on the same updating schedule until it is finished. After reading the summary again, I can't wait to find out what the disaster is and how Bentley rescues C. But my curiousity is really building to find out why Bentley will be the one in need of saving!
person Ellie
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE write more write moreee...please!
person yodi
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
139C is seriously creeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy. Ok maybe he is semi not creepy at times, but he'd give me nightmares.

Great, unique story!
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I won't lie...

I spent all day refreshing the page and waiting anxiously for an update

And boy was it an update! ^_^ I can't wait for the disaster! I want to know so badly what it is! Is it a storm? An incident in the labs themselves? I must knoooow!

person dazedandconfused
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, ooooh, oooh, I loved this chapter and so much happened! I literally squealed seeing another chapter uploaded, hugs author, you are the very best!!!! I enjoyed Bentley's date with Ken, it was cute but almost like a calm interlude before something bad happens. I wasn't sure how to take that female reptilian, she was rather kind of creepy and I didn't like the way she was watching Bentley.... shivers..... I think those guards are going to be back and causing trouble for Bentley but am hoping C will be able to save him, if that's the case. I am not sure yet about Jude but hope he's not one of the 'bad' guys. I am glad Bentley was able to intervene and save the poor little fox girl and hope she will be ok. So, C, was free at one time but was he human or shark?!! So many unanswered questions but I will be patient and wait to find out what happens. Good night!!! Thanks for updating twice today you are so very awesome!!!
person kiki
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So when this disaster you mentioned happen, will he try to save all those trials he met?
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading another story and refreshed page only to find this at the top of latest updates! I am so excited about the next chapter that I won't be able to sleep and will probably have dreams about what the disaster is going to be. I am so worried for Bentley but know C will do everything in is power to keep him safe. It seems like a huge 'explosion' of sorts is about to happen and I am afraid of the fallout. This chapter was a mix of everything that makes reading it so much fun.