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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person Moshee
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! Your work is just amazing. I love it!
person lo
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I really like the concept here and can't wait to see what happens next.
person littleolmee
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, hated what was happening to the fox hybrid but, that was a very realistic situation. Loved the sneek peek on what is upcoming for C & Bentelly. Now I really can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Keep up the great work, looking forward to what you have in mind next for the story.
person miles
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He won't be able to help all the trial ! T.T
Too bad !
Can't wait for more... Please, don't tease us like that ! :))
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just got home from work and was checking in to see what happens to Bentley and C but you haven't posted the disaster chapter, yet, LOL. I will check back again later or tomorrow! I hope you update soon......
person Kristina Morgan
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, more and more chapters! I am so very anxious to read what happens next and find out more about these hybrids expecially how 139C was altered into a man/shark. I am so excited about this new story you have written.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to be explaining more about the crossbreeds and how long they have been at the Lufdor Institute? I would like to know more about it. Thanks!
person snowleopard
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and it is very well written. I like that it is fast moving (and not dragging out) but not so much so that I can't keep up with what's going. I will keep an eye out for chapter 5 because I know it's going to be a lot of excitement going on and can't wait for it. Please update soon you have been on a roll and I would hate to have to wait another whole day to find out what happens but I am not pressuring you, seriously I am not, but it would be super awesome to see another post today instead of having to wait until tomorrow or the next day.
person Yamiik
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story just like i love your other stories
person Melsa
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OOh that last sentence makes me want the next chapter to come quickly.