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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person BijouDuMon
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOOWW!!! XD I can't believe C talks! And damn it, Bentley! Why did you have to leave him all alone?? :( But I'm sure hC will find him soon, right? Please update again soon! I can't get enough of this story!
person iriskzk1
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally the chapter i've been waiting for. Now I'm ready for the next chapter when they meet back up (hopefully). I think C was humans before because of some of the stuff he was saying and his language skills.
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awh. He ran from C. Not that I can really blame him. C would be terrifying. I really wish that they had time to rescue some of the other trials. who knows what will happen to them now. great job!
person Yodi
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes! C is free! Free to terrorize Bentley lol.

Poor Bentley doesn't realize C has his address.

Thanks for another fabulous chapter.
person Princess_Aiyana
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, finally, C and Bentley were making a little progress in their relationship (well, actually not yet but soon I hope)and then Bentley turned chicken and ran. This chapter met all my expectations plus some but now I am literally going nuts to read the next chappie. Oh, and I too hope that all the other 'trials' make it through everything safely.
person Kristina Morgan
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read another chapter to find out does C find Bentley and mate with him, what is the fallout going to be in the aftermath of the earthquake and tidal wave. Will any trials be missing and are they dangerous.
person lunamist
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story and great premise. I hope to see an update soon as I'm really enjoying this one.

Thanks for sharing,

lunamist
person kylee123
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can understand why Bentley ran away but he could have helped 139c a little since he saved his life. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have enjoyed all the stories you have posted so far.
person Honey
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg the angst I love it! I can't wait to see what C does to Bently in the next chapter. * U*
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really really like Bentley. He's such a sweetheart. Huh. wonder what doom is lurking. great job and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D