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by projectamy

person Maria
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
C: Lets go to your apartment...

Me: So they can have sexy time XD

I'm so immature :(

Can't wait for the next chapter as always.
person oo
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty gnarly.
person smint45
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing and really not what I expected^^ So C can talk , thats great helps a lot with the comunication^^ And C knows his adress so he will find him in time!!! Hope to hear from you agian soon!!!! See you!!!!
person My_perversities
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh!! He's out!!! Omg I love it!! How could Bentley leave him? So not cool. I hope C finds him soon! Can't wait for more.
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Happy 4th of July!!!

Wow, this was great, I never would have thought there would have been an earthquake and a tsunami! Very nice twist. I am worried about Jude and hope he's ok but hey maybe the 'feline' crossbreed saved him.........

Oooh, C sounds sexy the way he talks to Bentley but I was curious is he really speaking or does Bentley hear him in his head?!

Hey, Bentley, you don't know it yet but I think you'll have company real soon cause C has your address memorized, LOL.

I can't wait for their mating and see how you handle that! Is Bentley a virgin?

Thanks for updating so fast, I was just kidding yesterday and you probably knew you wouldn't be posting and that's why you uploaded two chapters the day before.
person lo
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I love the characters and this story you have created. This is wonderful and I look forward to the next chapter.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What was Bentley thinking sneaking away into the night? C is angry now (and that can't be good) so I think Bentley better hide before he finds him and snacks on his soft and juicy flesh, LOL. Update soon because I want to see some C/Bentley flesh on flesh.
person Dodoo?
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the new chapter!!!! I would bet anybody five dollars that Bentley is going to wake up with C in his bed but I doubt anybody would take that bet...
person snowleopard
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, I don't think Bentley realizes that Trial 139C is a predator and knows how to hunt his 'prey' which tells me he shouldn't have taken off like. I hope the shark finds Bentley before he gets into anymore trouble.
person Count Chocula
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so write more please!!!!!