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for Trial 139C

by projectamy

person miles
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Was C a serial killer before his transformation ?
Well, he save Bentley's life... Soo, there must be good in him...
Thanks for the fast update ! :)
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating^^
Another great chapter, I really can´t wait to read more... I think I´d be running too, meeting a halfshark behind glass and talking to it is kinda different to meeting it in person... especially all alone and after the shock of a tsunami (very well described btw)... and being asked to bring it home is kinda scary too... yep, I´d be running too.
Even though its stupid trying to outrun a sharp while bleeding...XD
I wonder if he´ll awake with sharky all over him?XDDDDD
But you got me curious- was C a human before? Sounds like that...maybe an elite soldier? Or a prisoner?
Sooo.. please update soon...( yes, shameless like a shark- give your readersharks a little fish and they´ll snap for more^^)
Best wishes
Chi
person Nine
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! So much action! So much excitement! And now Shark-man is Free!! I can not wait to see Bentley's reaction when he wakes up to C staring down at him lol...
I was heart broken for C when his human ran away. but i can understand Ben's fears... definitely! I am so curious about C's past!! I can't wait for all the answers! Thanks for writing this!
And what happened to the other experiments? were they stuck in their cages when the tsunami happened? heart breaking!
person piegirl
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Amazing. I just found this story and I love it (just likei loved 'pack dynamics' and 'a fair exchange') everything you write is so original and engrossing. Can't wait to read more.
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cliche as this is I can't help my self

*ahem*

you can run, but you can't hide!!!

bwahaha hiding from someone that could smell a drop of blood in gallons of water is silly
(especially when that someone knows your address)
person dut
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I like this story!
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now that was unexpected! I love how the tension just keeps building then explodes only to build back up again. It leaves me on the edge of my seat and I never quite know what is going to happen next! This unexpected turn of events was exciting and I can’t wait to see where this goes next! Thank you so much for sharing and please keep working hard! :)
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am gonna cry cause it looks like you are not updating today. I am so sad. See you around the weekend, I hope.
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How adorable! I'm totally glad your summary caught my eye. <33
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, finally understand why poor Bentley is the one who needs saving!

Think that C certainly believes that Bentley’s place is by his side, and has established, with an unsuspecting Bentley, an unspoken connection in his active mind.

Actually, C is starting to frighten just a little, and can understand Bentleys obvious fear, he really does have a right to be, and more so when he finds out C’s intentions.

Believe that C will find his way to Bentley somehow. Lots more fun in the chase –heightens the anticipation of capture.

Look forward to more very soon!