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Great one-liners from Bentley, giving his anxious disposition a very humorous outlet, stuck in an apartment with an amorous shark-man and his wayward urges with nowhere for him to hide. But after the kiss, does he really want to?

Wonder how long it will be before telecommunications are up and running, and the search is on for Bentley and Evander or information on the other missing people (and trials).

Great fun and look forward to more!

wow, finally they kiss! xD yaaaayyy (can't really express how happy that makes me <3 ) and Bentley was primed for mating (lol). I guess it's the first time of many to come (and I will appreciate them as an avid reader when they come).
I really liked how you went from Bentley falling asleep in the previous chapter to Bentley tied in his own bed in this one, it flowed very naturally with the story and not in a cliché, very obvious way.
This chapter made me smile and squeal like a 12 year-old-girl, not many can do that so keep up the good work :D

Don't know what happened to my review because when I reviewed it completely disappeared and only left the first sentence, so here I am reviewing again...
wow, finally they kiss! xD yaaaayyy (can't really express how happy that makes me)
I really liked how you went from Bentley falling asleep in the previous chapter to Bentley awakening tied in his own bed because Evander caught him, it flowed very naturally with the story.
The part where the shark DNA changed Evander's head and not just his appearance was really good, specially the "primed for mating" lol And since Bentley is attracted to Evander, I guess that isn't the first time he will be primed for mating (I can't wait for the next update!)
This chapter made me smile and squeal like a 12-year-old girl, not many can do that so keep up the good work :D

I like the progress and I really like how they interact, feeling each other out and all. Nice job!

OMG. Just saw a rec for this story on the slash pile on livejournal-- and I LOVE it. and I love the name you chose- Evander. I did wonder in the beginning why Bentley wasn't more concerned about the trials and how fucked up it all clearly was. Can't wait for more!!

I wonder how long Evander has been a trial for. I am scared for them being in the apartment while the aftershocks are still going on, since the building could collapse. I am llooking forward to the next chapter.

Oh that was fantastic!!!!! I totally loved the heated kiss!!!!! And I really like Evanders personality^^ He is so adoreble!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!

Loved it!

thats incredible, looking forward to learning more about evander. glad we found out he has a name.
i wonder if he was a soldier experiment, you know, create a 'super soldier'/weapon.

Thanks so much for the update. I love humor in this story and found myself smirking or chuckling on more than one occasion. Lovely work and I can't wait for the next one.

lunamist