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July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was just thinking that Austin should sketch Jin. I'm sure at least admiration may show thru.
And it seems to me that Andy's jealous of Jin. Maybe just jealous of the relationship Austin has with Ashley and Jin.
I'm also curious to find out what's with Jin; who gave him the pendant and why is so frightened when he's startled?
Another awesome chapter Lily! :)
And it seems to me that Andy's jealous of Jin. Maybe just jealous of the relationship Austin has with Ashley and Jin.
I'm also curious to find out what's with Jin; who gave him the pendant and why is so frightened when he's startled?
Another awesome chapter Lily! :)
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah. neither them are freaking about the guy issue. I'm quite fond of Austin. He's nice to his mom and he should ask to draw Jin since he's so beautiful. I wonder what will happen when Ashley gets bored. great job! :)
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want them to kiss already. You can tell that Jin likes Austin he just doesn't know how he will react. I can't wait to see what happens next though and I hope you update Unintended soon too. Keep up the good work.
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, Vicky, Ashley, same name! lol Austin's mom is so funny!
And I think Jin would rather be doing it w/Austin than Ashley.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
And I think Jin would rather be doing it w/Austin than Ashley.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this new story Lily! :)
I can feel Austin's uneasiness with the whole situation, but little by little he's coming to terms with the fact that he liked it. lol And now they're gonna do it again. :)
I like Jin; he seems really cool. But I can tell there's some sordid backstory on him and why he's so good with these things.
Oh, in chapter one, towards the end of the chapter, you wrote Anna's name instead of Ashley's. lol
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
I can feel Austin's uneasiness with the whole situation, but little by little he's coming to terms with the fact that he liked it. lol And now they're gonna do it again. :)
I like Jin; he seems really cool. But I can tell there's some sordid backstory on him and why he's so good with these things.
Oh, in chapter one, towards the end of the chapter, you wrote Anna's name instead of Ashley's. lol
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy... i can't WAIT to see where this is going!
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
do i smell a formerly abused child? cause if so, please let me know up-front and i will stop reading now. If not then bring on the angsty boy on boy goodness.
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wonder what Jin's story is..
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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting start though neither guy seemed particularly interested in the the other though Austin did admire Jin. I think I'll really like where this is going, but please please please don't make them both have the I'm-not-bi/gay crisis. Turning gay for just one person just seems so over down and a bit odd to me. great job though. can't wait for the next chapter :D