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for Broken triangle

by Lilysoos

schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Perfect lol. Now He Austin will be thinking about Jin even more and know that Jin likes boys as well. He is just going to keep thinking of Jin until he does the deed with him himself. So temping. Please update soon.
- Allie
person anonagain
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well that was mean!! Update please!! Really liking this story :))
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Was Jin trying to goad Austin at the end? Was Tyson the guy Jin was with? And for the love of God, why were they doing that in the bathroom (not even in a stall!)in plain sight of anyone who walked in? And in a straight club no less!

I hope Austin doesn't ignore Jin's calls (if Jin calls)b/c of what he saw.

Great chapter Lily! I'm glad you're back! I LOVE this story! :)
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap. the girlfriend is gettting more evil everyday. i love that he is sketiching him and hopefully he will make him his painting for class. and then his girlfriend will get uber jelouse.muahahahah
person Shaznay
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really wonderful story! I love the progression of Austin and Jin's relationship. Keep up the good work!
person papu
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually into any menage a trois, but somehow this works for me because of the slow girlfriend and the few sex scenes. I can see it turning into slash, which I like. I kind of hate Andy for being a hipster and having terrible customer service. Because hipsters stole the nerd flame of my generation and made it stupid. This is why we don't have hovercrafts.
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jealousy makes Ash bitchier! lol It's funny; Ashley's jealous b/c Austin is paying more attention to Jin, and Austin's jealous b/c of Tyson. lol

And Jin hanging out w/Austin alone is becoming a habit.

What's with Tyson though? Why is Jin so fucked up?

Great chapter Lily! Can't wait for more! :)
person midnightsscream
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awh. Austin so sweet. Makes me all warm and fuzzy
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this story and hope you update soon
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay! Austin is sketching Jin. I don't think Ashley is going to like that. I think she realizes what's happening even before Austin does. great job!