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OMG this is gonna be good :D

Haha Kedean will be Baisyl's bride? Interesting considering who is now pregnant and half(?) female.

Such an interesting dream. Looking forward to the next chapter.

YAY! I was waiting for this story! Nice prolog! Keep up the great work!
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I just want to say I have massive respect for the sheer size of this project. I have a novel-sized story in my head (and in many, many notes) too, and I'm continually daunted by the mere idea of attempting it- so now that I'm starting to get an idea of the extent of this one, all I can say is, MAD PROPS, BRO. So far it all makes sense, no deus ex machina, no plot point that seems pointless and forgotten.
I'd be curious to hear about your work process. To what detail do you plan ahead? How do you organize your notes? Posting something in installments has to be harder than just writing a book (or story) and publishing it all at once, where you can just go back and add shit to the beginning as you think of it.

Oh yeah and I do like the fact that you're making Kedean the "bride". :D I can't stand M/M-shippers who really just want to play dolls and need to make one guy the mommy and the other the daddy, and all that shit. I'm sure you know the type, and I like that you're not going there. :D

Holy shikake on banana bread! Now THAT is a beginning to a sequel! Keep it coming and i'll keep reading.

I love love LOVE your prophecies. They make a bit more sense now with the knowledge we have. Can 't wait tor the next chapter!!!!!!! :D