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I'm still reading your stories when I can, and I love them, my RL is ..... at the moment, I can't leave reviews frequently.

Oh I didn't think he'll take it like this! It's horrible. I thought they'll be together when he finds out he's pregnant. I feel his pain.

omg is Kedean does not come back to Baisyl soon i'm going to kick his ass XD i'm in love with this story so much plot woot ty so vm for it and looking forward to next chapter

You're EXTREMELY welcome. And myrt, too. :D

That said, a double cliffhanger? You're KILLING me. Aren't Alroy and Zyric related? Naughty! I'm still hoping for Zyric/Rhyan to happen, but in the meantime... well. ;P
And I agree with the previous reviewer, my, Baisyl sure is being dramatic, but that's his thing, isn't it?! You sure made up for (and explained) his previous lack of focus on Kedean- and I get that he feels somehow abandoned, but he's acting like they broke up, jeez. Is it because Kedean takes jobs that might kill him, and Baisyl's own fate is sort of up in the air, too? Hormones?

Awesome chapter, I laughed (literally), I cried (metaphorically), and now I'm off to agonize over TWO cliffhangers. I can't BELIEVE you. >.<

:D

Well Baisyl..... is.....NOT... going to jump out that window? Even if he does i believe he won't die/fall cause of the magic something will hold him back or soften his landing? RIGHT?

1. Zyric and Allroy sitting in a tree...! YES!
2. Kedean has to come back NOW before Baisyl figures out a way to kill that baby, or himself and that baby! Sigh, so much angst makes be tired...
3. Great chapter, as always.

XoXo

Dear Baisyl, why are you being so melodramatic? Haha

The first part of the chapter made me wonder if Zyric was intentionally trying to seduce Alroy and surprisingly(?) he was. :)

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

Will Baisyl realize he's pregnant soon? Haha I can't wait to see his reaction. Looking forward to the next update

In some reviews I read the hypothesis of Keaden being the Dragon Lord's bride. But according to the prologue's exact words it should be Baisil who becomes the bride. Am I missing something? (“When?” she mimics, as if surprised. Or amused. “Why… when you (=Baisyl) become the dragon lord’s bride, of course…”)
So, in my opinion, the question is Who's the Dragon Lord?? Is it a dragon who has the title of a lord and power, as is his right, over other 'lyzards' or is is someone else, someone who gained the epithet of a Dragon Lord because of his ability to contol them or has been given the role of guiding them, without him necessarily being a dragon himself?? Kedean perhaps?

OOOOOOOHHHHHH, finally Baisyl is close to discover about his son.

>>for the last book (TCatT), I didn’t write any notes.

THAT'S NUTS

I'm impressed.

About the newest chapter... that sounds like Zyric's dad was killed? D: Oh my. I like the new dynamic between Baisyl and Natara, actually I like who Natara is turning out to be. The only thing I'm missing a bit is how much Baisyl is missing Kedean; I mean it was there, but considering how much of a fuss he made of it beforehand I would have expected him to mope a lot more. And then scoff at himself, obviously. But that wouldn't stop him from moping anyway. ;P
I understand you had a lot of ground to cover in this chapter and didn't have much room to delve into that particular aspect, too. Just saying.

Also what the hell are you doing moving Zyric and Rhyan to opposite ends of the world?! I keep waiting for them to get a grip, uh, well... metaphorically speaking. Or maybe also literally. :D

Good story.