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Baisyl is so crazy and foolhardy (poor Rhyan). But wow his dragon form is impressive.

I can't wait to see what happens next during the 'meeting'

This was beautiful,ah... how much your style and wording make me feel happy :)
Aww, he'll keep the baby of course he will ;),
it's horrible, the mere thought of killing a child of someone who you love that much, even if you yourself don't want to have a child, us women have it so fucking hard grrrr. Also yes, I just remembered he doesn't think he'll see K again or know if he will of course fuck!!!
At least WE know he will :D xx

oh thank god O_O HE TURN INTO A DRAGON :O looking forward to more

I hope Alroy finds someone to be happy with, and I hope Zyric and Rhyan eventually end up together.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

Poor keadan. I hope he gets his answers soon and can return. Woot for zyric pushing alroy. I'm glad the feelings are mutual though alroy is denying them for now. Wonderful job!!!!!!!

Ahhh he won't let Zyric get laid with just anybody, will he? D: Truth is that I wouldn't mind seeing them hook up; I keep thinking they're related but it's actually Baisyl that Alroy is related to, isn't it? So yeah. I can see Alroy's resolve failing and then, later, Zyric is going to meet Rhyan again and going to be all cocky and crude about knowing how it's done, and Rhyan will be both embarrassed and exasperated. That would be both hilarious and in character. :D

So about Kedean, do I just not remember what exactly he's chasing after, or is it some big hidden plot point? Or is he just running far far away from dealing with this unfamiliar need for a particular person? So yeah the problem might be on my end, but I'm not clear on what the point of his adventure is. -.-

And I'm okay with the Baisyl scene being postponed until the next update, it feels tidier that way. I'm not a huge fan of too many different POVs per chapter.

How the hell do you write this much this fast?!

So is Keadan actually headed out to meet his father's people? Or merely a related tribe?

Zyric is such a silly boy, not trying to see from Alroy's perspective.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder if Kedean is feeling physical pain because of the mating process that was unintentionally started? I can't wait for the moment he finds out that Baisyl is pregnant; that'll be a fun one. For the moment, I'm content with finding out who his traveling companions are...

I feel sorry for Alroy. He wants Zyric but believes he doesn't deserve him (plus, the whole age thing is getting in the way). I can't wait to see what's going to develop there.

i'm glad to see Kedean is effected by the separation i was a little worried about that update soon u still have Baisyl on the ledge he must be getting tired XD

I hope Baisyl and the baby will be ok. Poor Baisyl.

I hope Zyric and Rhyan end up going out together.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!