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for The Scapegoat

by dont_look_now_but

person amothepirate
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story!! I can't wait to see how this develops and I hope it is a long one! Seems like it will be. I really like the "historical" names and research you have done. Very neat! I look forward to this.
person empress11690
schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS SO AWESOME!!! I really love the characters; their strengths and kinks! lol. I can't find such infectous addicting reads that often this is diffently a keeper. I just tell that all your characters are an a sense unfinished in their indivdual lives. Amon is very intriguing. Keep up the great work!
I am looking forward to seeing how this story plays out. Update as soon as you can!!! PLEASE!!
person Fan
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This needs a lot more reviews, people! This darkish story keeps me captivated, actualy.

I realize that Orochi/Belial would be the main pairing (if it has it anyway), but my brain keeps wandering to Razakel/Belial! Cute.
person MiriuOniaya
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I love love love this story, and look forward to every update!
person Raven
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i really enjoyed that chapter in a cruel way. i hope B gets his revenge. i thought that the dragon demon would come to his rescue in the end he didnt. poor b. i so hope you update soon i cant imagiane not knowing what happens for too long. i hope the other one gets whats coming to him and that b finds somewhere safe to stay mabie with that nice angel/demon. my poor b.
person iriskzk1
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You should have way more reviews than what you have because the story is soooo good. My patience level is like 0 when it comes to reading so I went over to fan fiction and read the rest of the chapters and all I could say is wow. I can't wait for the chapters on here to catch up so I can see whats going on. Until then, I will just follow the story on here.
person loverofyaoi
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in seeing how this...."relationship" will go. Also I want to see Baleil kick someone's ass because I feel bad for him. And I know he in not the weakest there, otherwise he wouldn't be in Second Class, right?
person iriskzk1
schedule July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read it and I loved it. The first two chapters kind of put me in the mind of Harry Potter. A very dark and distrubing Harry Potter but Harry Potter non the less. However, I like Harry Potter and love this!
person breezies
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I follow this story on FP, but I'm looking forward to re-reading it here. I keep getting the characters mixed up, lol.

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