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This is a really interesting story :)) good work! Too bad that this has been discontinued. 
 

Also stop abusing ma boy. Poor guy :((

Heys! I'm glad to see that you are still updating this piece; I know I haven't been leaving reviews lately but I have been busy wih college and lost track of your story. I'll be sure to begin reading again soon since I remember savoring each chapter you wrote. :)

I've read this on fictionpress.net to ch35 but it hasn't been updated in practically forever! As a rule of thumb, authors should update at least once a month otherwise they risk losing readers due to our short attention spans. It's only been 2 months but I've forgotten most of the characters because I've read so many other novels in the mean time. I hope you don't take this badly, it's just a little word of advise. I really do enjoy your original story and think it could actually make the shelves if not for the smut.

Hope to hear more from you soon!

Chapter 1-19. Woot! I love the story's concept! Definitely a keeper and I'm eagerly waiting for more updates. Keep up the awesome writing!

Poor Nisroc q.q

I'm pretty sure he saved Belial cuz the little one would have regreted (is that the right word?) it afterwards q.q

thanks for uploading!
Belial, Orochi and Nisroc are my favourite characters. I really like everybody else, too, but theese three are almost real to me.

I just noticed that through I follow this story and it holds a pretty high position in my reading list, I actually never revied till now.
I'm really sorry for not giving you my support as a reader sooner. :)

What an intriguing story... Can't wait for the next chapters.
The story is captivating, tumbling the reader into another reality, so colourful and convincing are the background, the characters and the storyline.

And while some readers see a similarity to Harry Potter, I can't help but be reminded of Alyrrawood university ("Broken wings", now a published story)- the atmosphere, the intense feelings, the way the main characters show more and more of the hidden depths in their personality and the many hidden details in the scenes which will only be revealed later to have a double meaning ... and I wonder if we here, too, will experience brilliant shifts in the point of view that make us realize what really happens "behind the scenes" might be totally different from what we believe...

I already know this will be one of my favourite stories and I hope it will not be abandoned!

Aw! Nisroc is such a cute little (err, well, hulking, really would be more appropriate) guy. Not much of our dragon whelp in this one eh? I check this page every day to see if you update haha. Great chapter! Hope the next one comes just as quickly!

Aww this is really growing into a charming tale :) I love it!!