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for Broken Innocence

by Aya

schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's kinda funny, I really like this story but I keep forgetting about it because of the title, for the last 8 or more chapters I kept skipping it when my eye caught the title- wasn't till earlier today when I saw the author that I was all omg I rember this and i like it can't wait for more <3
person NightShadeGhost
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*laughing so hard right now* Oh my gods! That last bit was beyond hilarious! *still laughing*

I really hope Nen learns to tell the difference between the two or else it's going to lead to waaaay more awkward times.

Love Elt. Just love him.

*grinning*

Thanks for sharing!
person iriskzk1
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, that chapter was hilarious.
person NightShadeGhost
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Magical low five. *grin*
I saw all the hints that they weren't human.... so did I miss the name they call themselves?

Thanks for sharing!
person NightShadeGhost
schedule September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They finally kissed! Elt and Merd finally kissed! *cheering*
And History is good stuff, let's hope they learn from it.

Thanks for sharing!
person NightShadeGhost
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*laughing hard* All that fighting! Should just make that day the day of fighting. *snickering* I love how Nen snapped on that half rank. Love how her anger came out. Going to be way worse when Pyanna finally gets that kind of power.

*grin* Thanks for sharing!
person NightShadeGhost
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elt. Floating all alone in the ocean. Don't worry! Merd is coming to rescue you!

And Derm..... Dude! Why weren't you more prepared for that punch?!

*laughing* Thanks for sharing!!!
person eilidhdawn
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow really wow
don't forget to update
have you ever read anne bishop
person NightShadeGhost
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I resisted reading this, because I know how caught up I get in your stories. I wanted to try to wait until there were more chapters up, but your posts on Facebook kept telling me this was being up dated, and called for me to read this story. So here I am, finished all five chapters in less than an hour and wanting way more. *happy grin* I very much enjoy this story.

Favorite part: “I’ll seduce your brother, have my way with him and then call him a slut.”

Thanks so much for sharing!
person perkazy
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bad, Ayato! Making Elt cry :-(
When is he gonna get some good, healthy, tender "this is the one"
type loving?