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for Broken Innocence

by Aya

person sapphire2619
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
<3<3<3<3. Hope there will be more in this series
person NightShadeGhost
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So super happy! Merd was brought back! Yay! It seriously made my day just to read that he came back. Woot Woot! I'm all happy and giggly, especially since Merd and Elt got married! Today, is a fantastic day!!! Now bring on le ropes! *laughing*

Thanks for sharing!
person perkazy
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the priest's reaction, "How could you leave a man like this!" I agree! Doubly glad you are doing the follow-up story on Elt's background. At least I'm assuming that was the idea whispered into your head! Thanks again for writing such a beleivable story with a wonderful world and lovable charactrs!
person iriskzk1
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, he's not dead!!!! I like Merd so much!
person Nanashi
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh you so suck, and you were right to run and hide. That was not fair what you did to Elt and Drem, but over all a great story.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No, how can you kill Merd and just leave it there. Elt deserves to be happy too. Hasn't Elt been through enough already with Leo. How can this be the end? There better be another part of this story soon. I just don't know how you could kill him though.
person iriskzk1
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God......How Could You Kill Merd!!!!! Poor Elt, he's never gonna get his chance at love....and now I'm crying. :(
person NightShadeGhost
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy grape juice! I get busy with school, rush though homework to catch up to all the chapters I've missed, and now Merd's dead. Why?! ugh! All I can hope for is that you'll do what you did with Mik, bring him back from the brink of death. Poor Elt! Poor Derm! It can't this way!
person may
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! Elt deserves to get a happy ending too!
person sapphire2619
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooo :( Merd can't stay dead :(