rate_review Reviews

Hmm...I wonder who the teleporter is...all of your characters are so interesting.

Did not know you updated, but I was glad to have two chapters to read!

Cannot wait to meet this enigma ‘Blake’ that is orchestrating the events from afar; with all that has transpired, the question is why he specifically helping Grey? And why is Grey so important?

Grey has no memory recall to speak of, so wonder if he was ‘placed’ in Ayers for his own safety in the first place. He seemed to know Hutton (hint) so wonder if he was part of something to do with Paras before he was at Ayers (possible memory wipe)-lots to think about.

Great fun so far -loving Jeff (monkey-cat, slash dog, slash black tiger) and the ever exasperated Grey.

Wonderful chapter!
I really like Jeff, he is really cute!
Grays talant is really fascinating, I wonder if there is something he can't do concerning machines.
I hope to read the new chapter soon ^^.

I really like your story! hope you continue :)

Your stile of writing is very sophisticated, I really like it. The plot seems very scheduled.
The Story is breathtaking and I like the action. And the characters are amazing.

This is definately my new fav story on ff!! really well written and good pace to the story, looking forward to an update!!

I loved the chapter...very entertaining. I can't wait to read more about their adventures.

wow!!!! I love your story!!! i really hope you keep writing it. There a ton of potential for this story and you set yourself up a great opening! This sounds like you reading for a great tale of epic battle and romance and i cant wait to see how it unfolds! keep it up i'll defiantly be watching for updates! and you just made me one of your biggest fans!!

I think Jeff is cute "you smell good", like a kitty with his catnip.

Very good start!!!!! :D not something I've read before. I like grey though and I think I shall like him even more as I read. Great job!!!!!!