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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The ever-overzealous Jeff and his winning ways –why so drawn to Grey? There must be something more to it than just the Pheriodexin (which should be out of his system by now- possibly). Agree with Grey’s train of thought, definitely needs to find out more.
Fallon Proctor and his family seem genuine. He has an interesting cause (something mirroring the role of Hank McCoy (Beast) x-men movie). Interesting response from Leonora Proctor, wonder about her 'talent' or what she might know.
Zeke seems deceptively inconspicuous (or downplayed), and something tells me he knows a little more than he is letting on. And with the very obvious threat that Jeff believes he is (well he thinks everyone is), then it could all be very interesting.
Lots to look forward to – well done!
Fallon Proctor and his family seem genuine. He has an interesting cause (something mirroring the role of Hank McCoy (Beast) x-men movie). Interesting response from Leonora Proctor, wonder about her 'talent' or what she might know.
Zeke seems deceptively inconspicuous (or downplayed), and something tells me he knows a little more than he is letting on. And with the very obvious threat that Jeff believes he is (well he thinks everyone is), then it could all be very interesting.
Lots to look forward to – well done!
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it was sooooo his wife she has the perfect spot to send information to others. ooooh is she sellin out the other talents too or just after grey cause he's a big catch
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August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was again amazing!!!! I think beeing an empath fits Proctor just fine^^ I wonder what Blake can do^^ I so can't wait to see what happens next^^Hope the police wont find them^^See you again soon^^
P.S if you update every week (which I don't know if you do) I might not review the next two times. I'm going on vacation next weekend and i dont know if I will get internet in the hotel^^So please don't think I abandond you or this great story^^
P.S if you update every week (which I don't know if you do) I might not review the next two times. I'm going on vacation next weekend and i dont know if I will get internet in the hotel^^So please don't think I abandond you or this great story^^
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August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story!
Two things though: 1) "Why weren’t Grey waking up at the same time as us?” 2) "As Vivian had told us; everyone were already seated and talking."
In those two sentences you should use the word "was/wasn't" instead of "were".
Two things though: 1) "Why weren’t Grey waking up at the same time as us?” 2) "As Vivian had told us; everyone were already seated and talking."
In those two sentences you should use the word "was/wasn't" instead of "were".
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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well now the two foxes will compete over Grey ahahaha
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw I like Jeff and Grey. Lovely story so far.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love love love love love this!
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is just so great! I'm in so much love!
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, I LOVE IT. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update. Please?!?!?!
Please update. Please?!?!?!
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this story is absoloutly amazing!!!!! I adore it!!!! I wonder what is different about grey that everybod wants him^^And why is Jeff so cuddly with him, not that I mind^^*leers evily* I really hope to hear more from you soon!!!! See you!!!