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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, it seems as if Grey needs regular fusion with an electrical current in order to function in an everyday capacity, and with the lessening of the toxin (or complete purge) from his body, it seems increasingly noticeable.
A lot of information in his dreams and a great deal to understand, before Grey pieces together the fragments of his memory -especially the owner of the apologetic voice. Believe it will get worse (mind will dredge up more good and bad memories) before it starts to get better (he starts to assimilate the pieces).
A real (mutual) kiss between Jeff and Grey, with a huge dash of desire. But, now poor Grey is overthinking the experience. Have to love him!
This could be the beginning of trouble for Grey, with a possible traitor in their midst. Would they now point the finger at Grey, with his unusual behaviour, diminishing countenance, and his dissimilar characteristics?
Thank you for another great update (always intriguing :-) ) and looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story ! I like your writing...
I'm looking forward the next chapter ! :)
I'm looking forward the next chapter ! :)
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!!! Although Greys dream was confiusing it also was very intiguing^^ Again I cn only say I want to know more!!!! I wonder who the traitor is^^ And I must comliment you again for you deep and detailed plot!!!! I really adore this story!!!! It is my favorite at the moment^^ Please update soon!!!!!!!!
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hits me as action tale but something new and differnt... though it obvousily about mutants, adjusted, or cyber humans... it still has hits me as different than usually stuff on here. Like all the varied characters in car, especialy beast man and his crush "little tigre" who seems to make himself useful one way or the other. Like the way they all work together, yet their finally goal, besides getting free certainly is not alway clear but I guess we'll learn as the story goes along. Keep writing, can't wait to know whats going to happen next.
A Fan of your tale, Gslinger
A Fan of your tale, Gslinger
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A lovely chapter detailing the arrival of the group, and the first meeting between Grey and Blake.
Jeff, in his initial days, seemed hypersensitive to Grey. In the Valley, he seems to have calmed slightly. While Grey, has suddenly found his perception and reaction to Jeff changing. Really, hope that this connection between them is a positive one and does not conceal any danger or hold any negative ramifications, but will no doubt make great reading!!!!!
Blake’s almost stony response to Grey after his revelation, seemed to be bordering on detachment following this newfound knowledge. Cannot wait to find out how this affects his obvious past assumption on birthdays.
There is so much to look forward to, Grey and his missing family, reason for his lost memories, his relationship with Jeff, his importance (or interest) to Blake, and how much of a part Grey plays in this very interesting world of Paras.
As usual, look forward to more soon.
Jeff, in his initial days, seemed hypersensitive to Grey. In the Valley, he seems to have calmed slightly. While Grey, has suddenly found his perception and reaction to Jeff changing. Really, hope that this connection between them is a positive one and does not conceal any danger or hold any negative ramifications, but will no doubt make great reading!!!!!
Blake’s almost stony response to Grey after his revelation, seemed to be bordering on detachment following this newfound knowledge. Cannot wait to find out how this affects his obvious past assumption on birthdays.
There is so much to look forward to, Grey and his missing family, reason for his lost memories, his relationship with Jeff, his importance (or interest) to Blake, and how much of a part Grey plays in this very interesting world of Paras.
As usual, look forward to more soon.
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!!! So we know Blake is a wolf^^Really fitting^^I want to read more about Greys talent^^It is so fascinating when he discribes how he uses it^^And I want to know more about why he is so different^^Beeing the only one with the talent and that strange birthday of him^^Hope to hear fom you soon^^And I hope I will be able to read the next installment too^^See you agian!!!!
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like where this is going :)
updates are like candy
i steals them if i have to
o.o
updates are like candy
i steals them if i have to
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August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!!! So we get to know a little bit over grays past^* quite confusing but I'm sure it will make sense some time!! I wonder what proctors wife's talent really is, she prinounced the emotion part so strange^^ we will see!!! I really hope I will get Internet on vacation cause I really want to read more of this great story!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Grey, gaining some aspects of memories have left him disorientated and a little lost. Hope that the next part of the adventure will give him a few more clues. And, as Grey believes he has some recall of a family, could this be the incentive needed to pursue a personal goal?
Look forward to more soon.
Look forward to more soon.
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!
I don't know what to think about Proctor. He seems to be nice enough, but his motives are a bit obscure to me in the moment. I would like to know if his wife is also a para. I really like your character design.
I hope to read more about Gray's past and the reason for Jeff's interest in Gray in the next chapters.
I don't know what to think about Proctor. He seems to be nice enough, but his motives are a bit obscure to me in the moment. I would like to know if his wife is also a para. I really like your character design.
I hope to read more about Gray's past and the reason for Jeff's interest in Gray in the next chapters.