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I really like this!
Please more! I can't wait for the next one...

What a warming chapter focusing on Liana and Grey reconciling and remembering the past.

Believe there is still a lot unsaid and Liana is still being evasive, but then again, so is Grey. He does not want to see his mother cry so holds back, and possibly, she is doing the same.

Lovely moments with Jeff, who is fast becoming my favourite character.

What brought Sam to Grey? Hope Proctor is ok as Liana did mention that he was more or less tempting fate, and sending Leonora and Samuel to a safe place would be in the best interest. Wonder if it was too late for them to get to a safe place and things changed for the worse. Or if Sam just escaped and needs Grey’s help (mind racking up ideas again).

Also, hope Zeke is ok in all of this!

Thank you for another great update and for always following up a review with a brief comment!

Wow that was absoloutly amazing!!! I think Gray is right with thinking his dream about the super computer was his father or at least one of the Mechanicians... I'm so intrigued^^I really want to read more!!!! I really adore this story and you narrative skills!!!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!!!

im going to reread entire thing.
i dont have a clue who sam is.
either hes new or i missed him somehow
love how this is developing
once again you bring tenderness and excitement
thank you for writing.

did i mention i stole all the good stuff too?
like oil,
junk food,
caffeine,
starches like rice and potatoes.
yap... im mean like that.
oh and u might also be going vegan.
since there is no meat or animal products.
enjoy ur carrots.... and um nuts?

i forgot to mention that i want him to have a nice dad:)

OMG what is happening!I can't wait til the next chapter!

omg i did not see that coming. you got me hooked!

A great chapter with lots taking place!

Enjoyed reading the exchange between Jeff and Blake, and though Blake may be the alpha of the community, Jeff seems willing to prove a challenge in the defence of Grey.

Liana, mother to Grey/Jackson/Jacks (do like the nickname Jacks, sounds sweet), and married to Blake. Is he really his (biological) father?

Do not believe the father son connection, as Blake has been too aloof, detached, and unapproachable, and made no effort to get to know Grey/Jacks, and his suspicions of his lack of memory only adding to the tension between them (did Blake already know the possible connection between Grey and Liana? Had Liana mentioned it to him at some point, that she had a son somewhere? Could this be the reason for his behaviour?). Not to mention Blake is a wolf and Grey is not tri-blooded (mechanician, human and wolf).

Overall, not the kind of father you want Grey/Jacks to have, and believe his biological father is still out there somewhere (if he is not dead!), and that this marriage is a kind of betrothing, specific to the Para society.

As you can read my mind is working overtime making good use of all the new information, so thoroughly enjoying the story which is moving nicely in the right direction.

Cannot wait for the next chapter, you have done a great job at maintaining the suspense

Wow so gray meets his mother^^That was really unexpected!!!! I really don't think Blake is his father, since he is half mechanican... I so can't wait to read more!!!! See you again soon!!!!

man. i love the emotion you manage
to weave into every chapter
i adore how jeff treats him.
if blake is the father
well maybe he doesnt know Grey/jackson
and it was so long ago that he thinks
jackson may be a traitor.
if he isnt i wonder what happened
to his real father
ooo he might be an alien
very cool.
either way he has a mom
i thought this was soo great
i adore your story
since i dont like cookies
you can keep those
i shall just now steal
anything with sugar in it
enjoy your diet muahahaha
i hope he and his furry friend
are happy. and i cant guess
where this going.