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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for my cat. She was sitting next to me when I finished this chapter and I got so excited I freaked out a little and scared her. Sam can fly and that's so freaking awesome!!!!
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun to read!
All these emerging talents are creating such a great assemble of characters you have to love.
The Bloods are sufficiently menacing. Moreover, how exactly does Kelly own Grey? Jeff! Jeff! Wake up! He is going to be upset with himself if Grey does leave. He will be heartbroken (or try to find him). Wonder how badly he is hurt and where Sam (I want that talent) will take him.
Will The Bloods now turn to Liana, Blake and the rest of the community as advantage, in the absence of Jeff? They seem determined that Grey is the key to something they need, so believe they will not give up easily.
Another exciting chapter as always!
All these emerging talents are creating such a great assemble of characters you have to love.
The Bloods are sufficiently menacing. Moreover, how exactly does Kelly own Grey? Jeff! Jeff! Wake up! He is going to be upset with himself if Grey does leave. He will be heartbroken (or try to find him). Wonder how badly he is hurt and where Sam (I want that talent) will take him.
Will The Bloods now turn to Liana, Blake and the rest of the community as advantage, in the absence of Jeff? They seem determined that Grey is the key to something they need, so believe they will not give up easily.
Another exciting chapter as always!
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol that review came back to bite me in the ass.
I was all eating yum food. Then bam doc says I'm
on a diet...due to high triglycerides, high blood pressure,high cholesterol and prediabetic.
Only 20lbs overweight. not even that big.......... just hates me. sooo hates me.
No sweets. No oils. No starches.
No caffeine. No salt. No breads.
no pork, minimal red meats
its steamed or baked...
I've already decided I want to be cremated.
Diet starts the 8th. I'm really depressed
about it.
Meow. I hope he doesn't get separated from
Jeff. And I want hot smexy smex next chapter.
You have your orders.
Although imagery of him getting the cream..
So hot!
I love this. :) Huggles.
I was all eating yum food. Then bam doc says I'm
on a diet...due to high triglycerides, high blood pressure,high cholesterol and prediabetic.
Only 20lbs overweight. not even that big.......... just hates me. sooo hates me.
No sweets. No oils. No starches.
No caffeine. No salt. No breads.
no pork, minimal red meats
its steamed or baked...
I've already decided I want to be cremated.
Diet starts the 8th. I'm really depressed
about it.
Meow. I hope he doesn't get separated from
Jeff. And I want hot smexy smex next chapter.
You have your orders.
Although imagery of him getting the cream..
So hot!
I love this. :) Huggles.
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really get bad feeling!! I don't think that the burning of greys and was a good singn... I really hope that everything will be ok!!! Thank you so much for the fast update!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol well at least you know something about biology. the human brain is the ultimate computer. cool chapter update :D
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
kelly has a death wish.
did kelly mark grey?
aw a little flying boy (so cute!)
oh.. well thats nice
*turns green*
wait... i want the ship loaded with mens too.
hot tasty sexy mens
that will make everything better.
and i wont care about food cause i will be in beds all the time ;)
i don't want grey and him seperated.. he wubbles him.
did kelly mark grey?
aw a little flying boy (so cute!)
oh.. well thats nice
*turns green*
wait... i want the ship loaded with mens too.
hot tasty sexy mens
that will make everything better.
and i wont care about food cause i will be in beds all the time ;)
i don't want grey and him seperated.. he wubbles him.
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September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
question. since the main character guy can control electrical pulses...and there are electrical pulses in our brains/nervous system....can he control people too? lol
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!!! I really liked the smutty goodness between Jeff and grey^^ I really wonder how his mother will react when she finds out!!! I can't wait for the next time try uses his talent!!! It's always so amazing how you discribe it!!!! I hope he will use it in the next chappy to find proctor^^ also I wan to see how his mother will react to him using his talent!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!!
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is great to read that Jeff and Grey are moving forward. Hope that it remains a contented union for a while longer. When Grey was with Shawn, believe there was a lack of emotion (induced detachment due to the Pheriodoxin); he was only physically with him. The distinction with Jeff is the strong physical and emotional attachment and more importantly, of his own accord (well, a little encouragement (and many shoves) from Jeff).
Do not think Grey needs to explain to his mother about his relationship with Jeff. Believe she is perceptive enough to realise what they mean to each other (and what they are doing with each other- very handsy Jeff). :-)
Think that if Grey is seeking Fallon and Leonora on behalf of Sam, then maybe being at the facility (when they find it) will open up further memories that may prove difficult. In addition, young Sam may want to be part of that ‘rescue’ mission.
There is a lot ahead to look forward to: Grey’s father, Zeke and the stolen file, Blake and Liana (and Hutton), rescue of Fallon and Leonora, APB on Grey, Ayers organisation, Grey’s fragmented past, power and mixed heritage and the significance of his birth date, to name but a few things in this great story. Keep it up!
Thank you for the great update and look forward to more soon!
Do not think Grey needs to explain to his mother about his relationship with Jeff. Believe she is perceptive enough to realise what they mean to each other (and what they are doing with each other- very handsy Jeff). :-)
Think that if Grey is seeking Fallon and Leonora on behalf of Sam, then maybe being at the facility (when they find it) will open up further memories that may prove difficult. In addition, young Sam may want to be part of that ‘rescue’ mission.
There is a lot ahead to look forward to: Grey’s father, Zeke and the stolen file, Blake and Liana (and Hutton), rescue of Fallon and Leonora, APB on Grey, Ayers organisation, Grey’s fragmented past, power and mixed heritage and the significance of his birth date, to name but a few things in this great story. Keep it up!
Thank you for the great update and look forward to more soon!
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September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
waiting is no problem if it gets us awesome updates like this^^ jeff and gray are adorable together~ and i am really loving his mom so far! cant wait to see his grandfathers reaction, that will probably be funny~ well, yet again i shall eagerly await the next update~ also sorry about the late reply, my cp got a ransomware virus on it, and i only managed to get rid of it today...