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January 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I love your story. Please update, I don't care if the chapter is unbetad I just want to know what happens next.
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update? Please?
I love your story and read it again and again. Pleas don't abandon it.
I love your story and read it again and again. Pleas don't abandon it.
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December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finally Lol. It's been so long that I couldn't remember half of the plot.
A couple of chapters reread and it came back to me.
I fell off the wagon and ate chicken :(
I adore this story and can't wait to see how it unfolds.
I have given up on updating mine.
I finished writing it... but the beta'ing basically requires a rewrite.
I don't have enough time anymore meh.
I am really glad to see you writing again.
I loved this chapter. I always want to learn more
about the why's and hows.
A couple of chapters reread and it came back to me.
I fell off the wagon and ate chicken :(
I adore this story and can't wait to see how it unfolds.
I have given up on updating mine.
I finished writing it... but the beta'ing basically requires a rewrite.
I don't have enough time anymore meh.
I am really glad to see you writing again.
I loved this chapter. I always want to learn more
about the why's and hows.
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December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad to read another update of your story.
What happened to Shawn? Was he only unconscious or did he die at the hands of The Blood?
The ‘Computer’ concept is viable, but do believe there is a lot more to it than just that. Possibly, the ‘Computer’ is not just an inanimate object, but possibly the ‘Mechanicians themselves? Could the ‘Computer’ be the link to all the Mechanicians? A culmination of their minds, just as Grey was almost sucked into the machine, could their ‘spirit ’ so to speak, be in the machine? And their power hidden, trapped, or locked away?
Though Grey and Jeff are in a difficult situation, do feel they will get more information from Kelly than with Ayers’ company.
On another note, believe that Blake knows more about this than we think. He had the original files, so could he have been aware of the connection between Grey and the fate of The Blood?
Apart from a few typos and misplaced words, another great chapter.
What happened to Shawn? Was he only unconscious or did he die at the hands of The Blood?
The ‘Computer’ concept is viable, but do believe there is a lot more to it than just that. Possibly, the ‘Computer’ is not just an inanimate object, but possibly the ‘Mechanicians themselves? Could the ‘Computer’ be the link to all the Mechanicians? A culmination of their minds, just as Grey was almost sucked into the machine, could their ‘spirit ’ so to speak, be in the machine? And their power hidden, trapped, or locked away?
Though Grey and Jeff are in a difficult situation, do feel they will get more information from Kelly than with Ayers’ company.
On another note, believe that Blake knows more about this than we think. He had the original files, so could he have been aware of the connection between Grey and the fate of The Blood?
Apart from a few typos and misplaced words, another great chapter.
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December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you are back *does happy dance* I can't tell you how glad I am that you gave us another chapter^^ And such a fantastic one^^ I really loved this chappy!!! And I'm so excited to see what will happen next^^ Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
CestLindor's back !!!! XD. Thanks for continuing this story despite how busy you must be m(_ _)m
For a collection of people who are supposed to be both advanced and powerful the mechanicans seem both unwilling and unable to take responsibility for their children. Was this all just an experiment on their part, a mistake they'd like to collectively forget? Or is it a question of numbers - perhaps their race is in decline and they wanted to see how compatible we were with their genetics?
For a collection of people who are supposed to be both advanced and powerful the mechanicans seem both unwilling and unable to take responsibility for their children. Was this all just an experiment on their part, a mistake they'd like to collectively forget? Or is it a question of numbers - perhaps their race is in decline and they wanted to see how compatible we were with their genetics?
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it please more:)))))
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April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you are back!!!!! I'm so happy!!! I really adored the newest chappy^^ I'm so glad that Jeff grabted him before the blood could take him and I'm happy that the burn didn't turn out as devasting as I anticipated!!! And now we get a small glimpse of the mechanicans again^^ They are so intriguing... I want more^^ I wish you good luck with your graduation and am eagerly waiting for more chappys in the future!!! See you soon!!!!
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if you are still working on this... I really miss this story and i would love you to update this again^^ Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this story and I can still say that I adore it!!!! I really hope that you didn't abandon this story!!! I wonder what the meaning of greys burned hand is.... probably nothing good!!!! But I'm so glad jeff is at least in safety!!! I really want to see more of greys talent and of cause I want to know more about his past and the mechanicans^^They are such a mysterious bunch^^ I can't wait for an update and I hope to hear from you again soon!!!!