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these chapter are always so break. I'm glad he finally had a revelation about what he wants and why. that should be super helpful. great job

Urggghhhh have Sev walk in on them, please, so Mr. Simmons has to stop. He won't, though, will he. Mr. Duarte will have to say no on his own accord eventually. >.>

I like it so far.. please more consistency with updating. I'm slowly waiting for that pivotal moment in Sev that he gets what to do and an actual reason. Simply having control of Caleb is too much of a near sighted goal to allow them an actual semi long term relationship. I love how you have spun Caleb's character, he is the typical submissive. Headstrong and heavily guarded with his emotions keep allowing him to 'sniff' out inconsistencies in Sev's resolve... and am I sensing Flinch's jealousy? just wondering.

Ah, I'm not on fictionpress. But whatever, I found it anyway. Liked the chapter; I still don't have the slightest idea how this is going to turn out (or, more precisely, I have a bunch of ideas and I'm not convinced by any of them) which is a good thing. Despite the high school setting, an unsual premise and focus; convincing main characters, too. Sev reads and feels like a teenager, Mr. Duarte does not. Thumbs up!

lol, ohmyfreakinggod! that kid is persistent.
yes, swimming again!

What a mindfuck! Sev doesn't know what to think, and neither does the reader. I mean Mr. Duarte obviously has his issues, and I think he's been genuinely unsettled by Sev more than once, but it's so hard to tell when that was, and when he was just fucking around. And now this. What a dick move- but at the same time, he's just doing what he has to in order to not be blackmailed; I can't really fault him for that, either. It's a power struggle between these two, and so hard to tell who has the upper hand when. I really like the way it keeps shifting.

I love this! The writing is easygoing and down to earth; easy to get sucked into, and the characters are normal people with normal people problems. I like that. Do you do email notifications of updates? I only check AFF at random, currently, but I'd hate to miss out on this one. My email is on my profile!

GASP no friggin way! no friggin way!!!!!
come on sev, stop falling apart and straighten up. does he love swimming? he should go back to it if he does. it might help with that lonely time he has now that his bf is dating, ya know? at least start going back to the swimming practices/training, i know he cant compete until his blood is clean...

Oh I am loving this!! Mr Duarte is no shrinking voilet! Sev is all kinds of fucked up.

yea, I am so totally in love right now with this story.

I don't always like teacher/student stories, nor do I always like BDSM stories but there is something about this one that feels very real and gritty and also charming! Please keep going. I really like Sev thus far.